Saxon Crow

Two Parts made One

Your face, so familiar like it's always been here
Those eyes so deep that I happily live there
Your voice is a melody I've heard so many times
And when i hold your hand it's like I'm holding mine
You know how I think and all that I feel
You're a part of my soul made so very real
And the best part about this 
Is that you feel the same
Two parts together 
Forged by loves flames 
And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
Strong in our hearts that were made to be shared
Happily together, forever in love
Two parts of a soul finally made one. 

 

 

Comments11

  • Janani

    that was really touching and it somehow reminded me of how much i love my little brother:)

  • Neil Higgins

    Another superb write SC.
    "Two parts of a soul finally made one."
    Amen to that.

    • Saxon Crow

      Thanks Neil. Always appreciated

    • L. B. Mek

      what a wonderful read, relatable
      to say the least
      thanks for sharing, dear poet

    • Teddy.15

      kid, you need to start writing songs, every time i read your work i see lyrics of a great song. you pulled it out of the bag once again sax. gorgeous

      • Saxon Crow

        Yeah, you've not heard me sing. I'd make Orchi sound heavenly! But thanks for reading Teddy

        • Teddy.15

          A writer of songs doesn't need to be the singer just the orchestra!

        • orchidee

          Good write SC.

        • Accidental Poet

          I believe Teddy just referred to you as a magician Sax. And I have to agree. 👍

          • Saxon Crow

            It's true I'm great at disappeari.....

          • Fay Slimm.

            Brilliant love poem Sax. -- must read this some more so into my faves with this gentle tribute to love.

            • Saxon Crow

              From you Fay that is a real compliment and am honoured you think so. Thank you

            • Freni Karaluthara

              Dear Saxon Crow, your poem really touched my soul. And the much liked lines are:
              "And nothing can stop us now our path has been made
              Strong in our hearts that were made to be sharedard"

              thank you for sharing it

              • Saxon Crow

                Dear Freni
                Likewise, thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave your kind comment

              • Joe Dawson

                'Her touch as tender as the breeze, her smile can bring me to my knees...' Love, an indispensable part of life. Good write. Joe

                • Saxon Crow

                  Many thanks Joe and a lovely two liner included 🙂

                • hotidris

                  That's a beautiful and romantic poem you wrote.

                  • Saxon Crow

                    Thanks Idris

                    • hotidris

                      You're welcome, Saxon.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Being at one together is so very wonderful SC, I know how that is.

                      Andy

                      • Saxon Crow

                        I know you do GF. It's a blessed gift



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