The auto response is not us!

Poetic Dan

My automatic response today made me feel unworthy of my title!

I'd lost all love and was ready to attack nothing else mattered, just the red rag!

The more fear there is the more it builds up, if not for the breath it would just be blood

Control can't be lost if its under the boot, all actions restricted to an inch of a move.

Yet at 5:55am I was starting it all off with a body check in, putting positive air in right from the beginning.

Proud in my accomplishments I was not ready for the hit, does my journey end here and time to quit

Only I can decide if this was a sign or a gift, to truly appreciate that surrender doesn't authentically make relaxed.

When it is easy to write, talk or move. Yet finding balance for all three in the Grove, takes a lifetime to evolve and discipline to improve.

Letting go to hold on and expand our youth, in hopes to pass down less triggers in a blue sky of truth.

Memories will create actions but it doesn't have to be you! I scribe this with a passion to never give up on me too!

 

 

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 4th, 2021 02:19
  • Comment from author about the poem: I hold on to no shame not for money or fame, but to enjoy each moment be it love or pain! It is one hell of a ride and I'm glad I came....ooo definitely think I'll use this next time lol or it may stay in the deep for other like Dave to see! Always appreciate your time and company
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  • Caring dove

    Expressive writing Dan ... “ blue sky truth “ love those words

    • Poetic Dan

      Bless and thank you so much because if not for you I'd miss the "of" but I can now relax in the bliss above lol

      Always appreciate your time

    • Doggerel Dave

      I'll ferret it out, don't you worry about that, Dan.
      The main item in the agenda:
      No one should be telling you It's easy, mate. to move on is hard work on yourself with setbacks which pop up from time to time. But being aware of what is happening is more than half the battle.

      • Poetic Dan

        Ha ha, that is so true and as I get ready to do my new morning work out ill let out a battle cry and know I'll be helped in my shadows!
        Really appreciate your time my friend

      • Saxon Crow

        Awesome empowering stuff Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          Cheers buddy, highs and the lows got to let it all go!
          Always appreciated



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