Omens

Fay Slimm.

 

Omens.

 

I chased this evening evening's parade,

woven-framed patterns of

tin-foiled filigree, gilt-tied

to greenery's final attempt to beat fade.

 

I watched as light lightened pale sky,

viewed universe-fired display

night's birthing dance

turning black into starry-eyed silence.

 

I saw change changing ether-haze hue

to dusk-covered eeriness 

creeping round sickle-shaped  

moon-smile thru' dull-as-dust gloom.

 

I heard in day's goodbye goodbye's solo  

purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, 

gold-streaked striped azure sung
 
in lunar duet with dark's rising crescendo.  

 

I knew tonight tonight's black feelings

 on sunset-divide, cloned-omens 

 from cauterized colours 

spoke to my waiting canvas so clearly. 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 6th, 2021 00:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another look at a verse of celebration I wrote moons ago - - hope you enjoy.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 35
  • Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek
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  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful art turned into words Fay.

    Andy

    • Fay Slimm.

      So kind of you to say so my friend and thank you indeed.

    • Doggerel Dave

      How do you put words together and structure them to produce such richly embroidered tapestry, Fay?

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ah you spoil me by asking how I write as I do Dave - all I can say is that I close my eyes and unconditionally surrender to versifying my style of embroidery - - hope this helps........

        • Doggerel Dave

          Nah - doesn't at all Fay. How do I operationalise that?
          I had no particular wish to spoil (as in hurt) you - I was trying to spoil your magic, and obtain something out of the remains to use myself. And of course, I failed completely................

        • L. B. Mek

          share, and share it again dear Fay
          your poetry, gets better with every read
          (in my humble opinion)
          'I saw change, changing
          ether-haze hue to dusk-covered, eeriness
          creeping, round sickle-shaped moon-smile
          thru' dull-as-dust gloom.

          I heard in day's goodbye: goodbye's, solo
          purple-trailed, scarlet-dyed, gold-streaked
          striped, azure sung
          in lunar duet, with dark's rising crescendo. '

          • Fay Slimm.

            Masses of thanks for all your encouragement L.B,. - am delighted you found value in reading Omens.

          • Neville


            these words have just found their ever home .. I note how comfortable they sit here ... and my guess is that if they could, they would be smiling with us too .....

            Neville .............................. 🙂 x

            • Fay Slimm.

              So good to know Omens have found their ever- home in your warm heart |Nev....... gratefully thanking you for all your reviews. Smilin' back at ya and widely too.............x

            • SureshG

              While all I can muster is ooooh! and aaaah! to my favorite scene of the day, your words breathes it life

              • Fay Slimm.

                Delighted you felt the life behind some of the lines in Omens dear Suresh - thank you sincerely for all your encouragement.

              • Trenz Pruca

                Always a pleasure to read, Fay. Thank you.



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