Neville

When You Find These Words

When You Find These Words

 

When you eventually stumble

upon these words, I do so hope

you find them good enough to ignore ..

 

 

Comments13

  • Fay Slimm.

    Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will not adhere to of that I am sure mon dear ami..........x

    • Neville



      how reassuring is that .. thanks Fay ................. x

    • Doggerel Dave

      Yep - so shall I do....

      PS: Neville - why do you always give us shorties here?
      Couldn't you one day present something longer? "Laid bare & Waiting" would be good....

      • Neville



        Ah' you old rascal ................... I shall go see if I can muster something up in the very near future ๐Ÿ™‚

      • Neil Higgins

        ๐Ÿคฃ Brilliant.Simply brilliant.

        • Neville



          You are too kind by half sir ..................................... ((( ๐Ÿ™‚ )))

        • L. B. Mek

          Amen!
          'what is brevity, in poetry
          they - task, wrongly'
          Here - read, and realise
          how you can weave
          a million dreams
          to be imagined, differently
          by what each reader: gleans...
          (your subtle brilliance
          at its unassumingly, penetrative
          Best! my friend)
          when you can execute poetry's
          transformative artistry with such
          humble - accessible words, why bother
          writing extra pages of explanatory lines
          for those, too: ignorant
          to read, what's been outlined
          so accessible and emphatically: transparent!

          • Neville



            Far too generous L.B but always appreciated far more than I am capable of expressing here .. N ๐Ÿ™‚

          • Laura๐ŸŒป

            Neville,

            Your poemโ€™s title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this readerโ€™s mind.

            Laura๐ŸŒป

            • Neville



              I am so grateful to your curiosity my friend .. please convey my very sincere thanks ๐Ÿ™‚

              Neville ๐ŸŒป

              • Laura๐ŸŒป

                โ€˜Your wish is my commandโ€™โ€ฆ๐Ÿ˜‰๐ŸŒป
                Have a wonderful day.

              • 3 more comments

              • orchidee

                'Tis what they say too, when they stumble upon my singing! heehee.
                Insanity? A notice said 'This is a Private Notice - Please do not read'. Doh!

                • Neville



                  thank you Mr. O .. twas read before I realised ................................................................. N ๐Ÿ™‚

                • SureshG

                  Forget I was ever here - NEVER

                  • Neville



                    Absolutely NOT NEVER ........................... cheers Suresh ๐Ÿ™‚

                  • Trenz Pruca

                    One should never ignore what one stumbles over. I enjoyed your trip. Forgive me.

                    • Neville



                      you are 100% forgiven .. and thanked too I might add ........... ๐Ÿ™‚

                    • MendedFences27

                      I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.

                      • Neville



                        ... Not only good to hear, but good to hear from you Phil ................. cheers N ๐Ÿ™‚

                      • Accidental Poet

                        Good enough to explore, yes N. For poets are we, and poets leave no stone unturned is search of truth. ๐Ÿ‘

                        • Neville



                          ................................... that was no accident, woz it .. those words were meant to be writ and said and pondered upon ........................ cheers AP ๐Ÿ™‚

                          • Accidental Poet

                            cheers to you too N. ๐Ÿ˜‰

                          • Saxon Crow

                            ..................................................................!

                            • Neville



                              Tha ......................................................................................................... ๐Ÿ™‚

                            • Goldfinch60

                              I will never ignore any of your words Neville.

                              Andy

                              • Neville



                                Hey good morning Mr. G60 .. and just to put it mildly, I'm thanking you kindly ๐Ÿ™‚

                              • Dove

                                I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
                                Sunshine on a rainy day! โค๏ธ

                                • Neville



                                  .................. and then I shall be doubly blessed ................. but dont be too long now ๐Ÿ™‚ โค๏ธ



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