Amen!
'what is brevity, in poetry
they - task, wrongly'
Here - read, and realise
how you can weave
a million dreams
to be imagined, differently
by what each reader: gleans...
(your subtle brilliance
at its unassumingly, penetrative
Best! my friend)
when you can execute poetry's
transformative artistry with such
humble - accessible words, why bother
writing extra pages of explanatory lines
for those, too: ignorant
to read, what's been outlined
so accessible and emphatically: transparent!
Your poem’s title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this reader’s mind.
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Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will not adhere to of that I am sure mon dear ami..........x
how reassuring is that .. thanks Fay ................. x
Yep - so shall I do....
PS: Neville - why do you always give us shorties here?
Couldn't you one day present something longer? "Laid bare & Waiting" would be good....
Ah' you old rascal ................... I shall go see if I can muster something up in the very near future 🙂
Amen!
'what is brevity, in poetry
they - task, wrongly'
Here - read, and realise
how you can weave
a million dreams
to be imagined, differently
by what each reader: gleans...
(your subtle brilliance
at its unassumingly, penetrative
Best! my friend)
when you can execute poetry's
transformative artistry with such
humble - accessible words, why bother
writing extra pages of explanatory lines
for those, too: ignorant
to read, what's been outlined
so accessible and emphatically: transparent!
Far too generous L.B but always appreciated far more than I am capable of expressing here .. N 🙂
Neville,
Your poem’s title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this reader’s mind.
Laura🌻
I am so grateful to your curiosity my friend .. please convey my very sincere thanks 🙂
Neville 🌻
‘Your wish is my command’…😉🌻
Have a wonderful day.
......................................... if only 🙂 🌻 🌻
… 🕯 🙏🏻❤️🌻
absolutely 🌻 n truly .. you bet ............... x
'Tis what they say too, when they stumble upon my singing! heehee.
Insanity? A notice said 'This is a Private Notice - Please do not read'. Doh!
thank you Mr. O .. twas read before I realised ................................................................. N 🙂
Forget I was ever here - NEVER
Absolutely NOT NEVER ........................... cheers Suresh 🙂
One should never ignore what one stumbles over. I enjoyed your trip. Forgive me.
you are 100% forgiven .. and thanked too I might add ........... 🙂
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
... Not only good to hear, but good to hear from you Phil ................. cheers N 🙂
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Tha ......................................................................................................... 🙂
I will never ignore any of your words Neville.
Andy
Hey good morning Mr. G60 .. and just to put it mildly, I'm thanking you kindly 🙂
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! ❤️
.................. and then I shall be doubly blessed ................. but dont be too long now 🙂 ❤️
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