When You Find These Words
When you eventually stumble
upon these words, I do so hope
you find them good enough to ignore ..
- Author: Neville ( Offline)
- Published: August 6th, 2021 04:10
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 59
- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Laura๐ป, Accidental Poet
Comments12
Good enough yes - but ignoring never - -- a plea that your readers will not adhere to of that I am sure mon dear ami..........x
how reassuring is that .. thanks Fay ................. x
Yep - so shall I do....
PS: Neville - why do you always give us shorties here?
Couldn't you one day present something longer? "Laid bare & Waiting" would be good....
Ah' you old rascal ................... I shall go see if I can muster something up in the very near future ๐
Amen!
'what is brevity, in poetry
they - task, wrongly'
Here - read, and realise
how you can weave
a million dreams
to be imagined, differently
by what each reader: gleans...
(your subtle brilliance
at its unassumingly, penetrative
Best! my friend)
when you can execute poetry's
transformative artistry with such
humble - accessible words, why bother
writing extra pages of explanatory lines
for those, too: ignorant
to read, what's been outlined
so accessible and emphatically: transparent!
Far too generous L.B but always appreciated far more than I am capable of expressing here .. N ๐
Neville,
Your poemโs title is intriguing. It piqued my curiosity to give it a read. Glad to have done so. I found your words too good to ignore. An ingeniously thought-out brief poem that will last a long time in this readerโs mind.
Laura๐ป
I am so grateful to your curiosity my friend .. please convey my very sincere thanks ๐
Neville ๐ป
โYour wish is my commandโโฆ๐๐ป
Have a wonderful day.
......................................... if only ๐ ๐ป ๐ป
โฆ ๐ฏ ๐๐ปโค๏ธ๐ป
absolutely ๐ป n truly .. you bet ............... x
'Tis what they say too, when they stumble upon my singing! heehee.
Insanity? A notice said 'This is a Private Notice - Please do not read'. Doh!
thank you Mr. O .. twas read before I realised ................................................................. N ๐
Forget I was ever here - NEVER
Absolutely NOT NEVER ........................... cheers Suresh ๐
One should never ignore what one stumbles over. I enjoyed your trip. Forgive me.
you are 100% forgiven .. and thanked too I might add ........... ๐
I have found them and they speak to me. - Phil A.
... Not only good to hear, but good to hear from you Phil ................. cheers N ๐
Good enough to explore, yes N. For poets are we, and poets leave no stone unturned is search of truth. ๐
................................... that was no accident, woz it .. those words were meant to be writ and said and pondered upon ........................ cheers AP ๐
cheers to you too N. ๐
..................................................................!
Tha ......................................................................................................... ๐
I will never ignore any of your words Neville.
Andy
Hey good morning Mr. G60 .. and just to put it mildly, I'm thanking you kindly ๐
I found them interesting, ignore them I shall until I resurface again , like
Sunshine on a rainy day! โค๏ธ
.................. and then I shall be doubly blessed ................. but dont be too long now ๐ โค๏ธ
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