Upon a Time Once
Upon a time once
my word how we loved
Aye, didn’t we just ..
And with never a thought for
those moments we lost
Nor for gratuitous lust ..
Upon a time once
my word how we loved
Aye, didn’t we just ..
Though with never
a thought for the
consequences of such
Whether borrowed, or lent
to us, in that moment
it was all time well spent ..
Upon a time once
my word how we loved
Aye, didn’t we just ..
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Author:
Neville (
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A read to remember the whens and the hows of once upon such a time - - great stuff again Nev. -- with a sigh................x
it is just so easy to say thank you my friend ......................... thank you no end .. N 🙂 x
And why did it ever end, Nev? It was going so well.......
who knows .. sometimes ya just dont see it coming, do ya ........................................ ta Dave 🙂
'Regardless
of whether, borrowed or lent
To us in that moment
it was time, well spent'
'Upon a time
once, we had everything
didn’t we: just ..'
(my melancholy, has a new muse
its in the white
of your poetry's capacity, to soothe)
I'm a bona fide, fan
for just, such a reason
my oh, so talented friend!
you just made my mane, my mid day and most probably my nocte too sir ... cheers n truly 🙂
Simple but full of reverie. You've caught the true magic of writing few words but saying so much more here Neville.
thank you kindly my old friend ................... so hope things are going okay your end ... N
A fine write Neville.
Is this any relation a poem 'Pon a time'?!
Note to self: this is very 'sad' of me, I know. Ain't I got better things to do, than looking for missing 'u's?
No Mr. O no relation .. the only relationship between the two is at that juncture where your synapse is bridged with a sprinkling of positively charged pixie dust that makes you assume there might be .. ta tho' for enquiring 🙂
Love is a multifaceted experience. It can be very complex; but not so much at a young age. No worries to be had until…
As I read your words, my musings have been interrupted with a sudden thought…so much is being said with just a few words; hence the tsunami.
Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
you can beat an egg & a drum, but you just can't be a tsunami can ya ..... Thank you so much my friend for considering 'Upon a Time Once' .................... 🙂
Neville 🌻
And what a time it was, and still is N. 👍
Absolutely .. spot on and truly .......................Yours truly .. Cheers AP ... 🙂
May that love be still there Neville.
Andy
Thank you kindly sir Goldie and back at ya, Yours Truly ... 🙂
Tongue Twisted, once upon a time, imprinted in my mind and heart, but this is no fairy tale, just genuine feelings and words! Smilez
I know .. I still think like that too and the variant came from my own noodle ... bless you Dove n do keep smiling ....................... 🙂
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