Saxon Crow

Words Left Unsaid

Words left unsaid

Like a love undeclared

Are written on the heart

And in the lonely nights are read

 

When there is only you

And unfaithful memory

These lines of the mind

Take on different meaning

 

And what was unspoken

Can deafen loves young dream

Shouting hurt where none existed

When all you needed was the courage to speak

To speak of truth and let the burden of your heart free

Comments7

  • Teddy.15

    wow, the thing i always mean to say Sax is that your presentation is clearly as important to you as your words, this like all your poems is beautful. this is relatable to many. Thank you.

    • Saxon Crow

      Thanks Teddy, you're too kind

    • orchidee

      A fine write SC.

    • rebmasters

      Beautiful first stanza and bittersweet throughout ❤️

      • Saxon Crow

        Thanks Reb, very much appreciated

      • dusk arising

        A woeful tale of regret when ones head overruled ones heart.

      • MendedFences27

        A beautiful piece of poetry, of love never spoken and the aftermath of that hollowness. Life's many forked pathways are strewn with the poorly selected and often neglected choices. Here you have shown that words "unspoken" can be as powerful as those we shout. The "unsaid" can scar as deeply as the freely spoken. We spend years wondering why and what if, and at some point we render a graceful and articulate poem. Well done. - Phil A.

        • Saxon Crow

          Many thanks MF for your time to read and comment

        • Coyote

          Loved this, particularly the final stanza. Excellent!

          • Saxon Crow

            Thanks Coyote 🙂

          • Goldfinch60

            May those words in your heart break free and show the love that you have for others.

            Andy

            • Saxon Crow

              You old romantic you!



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