The Course

Lorna



The course has been plotted

The horse taken from the barn

The rider mounted

The journey begins

Over sunlit hills

And down into dark valleys

Wading through streams of salt tears

Fallen from love sick hearts

And broken dreams

The strain of struggle

And on the horse and rider plunge

Whipped by branches

Side swiped by fate

Cheered on occasionally by love

Reaching for trophies

Triumphant

Then tired

Then sore, perhaps lame

When the horse is stumbling

The rider unseated

Ambition melts and fades away

Quiet of home beckons

Takes them in

Enough of the world

Peace is the last cup they’ll win

 

  • Author: Lorna (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 11th, 2021 02:12
  • Category: Reflection
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  • Arvy

    "Wading through streams of salt tears Fallen from love sick hearts" that hit so close to my heart. Thank you for sharing, Lorna!

  • Classicmister

    Loved this Lorna - It must be wonderful to horse ride in the open country - I envy you. Last time I rode a horse it was in France on a trek organised by the campsite. The horse in front of me held everybody up by stopping to eat the hedge and the French rider couldn't pull him away - So I attempted to say in French "Give me the reins" Not knowing the word for reins I risked that it would be the same word in French so I said "Donney moi les reins" ... The rider looked confused as what I was saying was "Give me the Queens" !!

    • Lorna

      The horse must have been confused as well! Very funny.

      I rode for many many years - my husband was a horseman - but the poem is actually about life, riding just a metaphor.

    • orchidee

      Good write Lorna.

    • Accidental Poet

      Many trails in life's lessons Lorna. May you always be on the trail of happiness and love. 😊

    • Laura🌻

      Lorna,

      Loved your poem, especially the last line… “Peace is the last cup they’ll win” complemented with a great choice of lyrics.

      Laura🌻

    • Goldfinch60

      May that cup of peace be forever with you Lorna.

      Andy



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