Perfectly Hued
If all we could see was
perfectly hued ..
Shaded in silver
shadowed and blued
As comfortably snug
as your old
quilted jacket
and well-worn pair
of handmade brogues ..
With all to be gained
and nothing to lose
We would surely
never again dream of
closing our eyes to the world ..
-
Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: August 11th, 2021 02:29
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 80
- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., MendedFences27, Laura🌻, Accidental Poet, L. B. Mek
Offline)
Comments12
Oh what a world that would be if sight became coloured with love for otherness. - - a read to remember so into my list of faves with this little gem.............x
wot a way to kick of me Wednesday my fair lady ................................................. many humble thanks from me to you 🙂 x
Well...yeh.. um..of course ..why not..
Good write Neville.
well thanks n all that, for that Dave 🙂
A fine write Neville.
that's just fine then thanks Mr. O 🙂
An appealing thought rtdes upon your words this fine wednesday but..... would I trade my dreams for the world to be so, shaped?
Nay sir, open eyed and i say nay sir. My dreams are a wonder for my inner eye only and mine alone. They are the wit of my poetry and i shall take them with me to journeys end.
Thank you neville for lighting a fire with your words today to exercise my thoughts along a track they had not seen.
..................... He came, he saw, he concurred & ever so politely ............................. I shall drink to your wellbeing this Saturday eve sir at 20.00hrs or thereabouts precisely 🙂
"Perfectly hued," is of itself a dream. Even a world without people, still must contend with the nastiness of Nature. A day might be so hued during the daylight hours, but then there is the darkness, and the world is full of predators and prey, storms and disasters, angry seas, unbearable temperatures, etc.
"If" begins your poem and it is a mighty big word, but accepting the impossible as possible, it would be a beautiful dream come true, such that we could surely never close our eyes again.
Your poem presents a view to the world and to the nature of man that we all wish to be true. It is food for thought served on fine china. It is appetizing to the palate and honey to the taste. Loved it! - Phil A.
mere thanks aint good enough to express how grateful I am to you my friend for the visit, words and love you just shared ............................ N 🙂
Neville,
A colorful world indeed…
if only we could, we would…
my dear poet!
A masterfully written poem.
Thank you for sharing.☺️
Laura🌻
thank you for checking in my very dear friend .. ever welcome and always appreciated 🙂 🌻
So very much to be seen, if only our eyes could envision it for real. Beautiful write N. 😉
thank you kindly my friend ...................................... N 🙂
So very true, if only that would be so all would be wonderful Neville.
Andy
indeed it would my golden friend ... and thank you for noticing .. 🙂
I only close my eyes for kisses and divine music, but never for 🌈 rainbows or lovely hues!
Great thought provoking poem!
... I feel like popping over to your cloud and bringing my mandolin my friend .. no rainbows I promise
🙂
"We would surely
never again dream of
closing our eyes to the world .."
Indeed, but I surely need a pair of sunglasses.
me too .................. cheers M & M 🙂
Brilliant!
well I neva ................ thanks in advance of the cheque my friend 🙂
Perfectly hued, if that’s what we choose to see, or as shown by thee.
How very kind and how very true my friend ......... bless you 🙂
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.