Love Hiccups

Saxon Crow

Love hiccups that's what you give to me
Like a tiny little explosion of heartfelt ecstacy
It happens every single day when you come across my mind
And I always get my morning fix when I see you by my side
Then later in the evening
Before i close my eyes 
I get that breathless happy feeling
That sees me through the night
There's no way that I can stop it
It just happens spontaneously 
It's our souls that are embracing
And kissing lovingly 
So bring them on those glorious tickles
That reach into my heart 
Because I know that you also get them too
And they say we will never be apart
Love hiccups, the greatest gift that has ever been created
It tells you that some people's love is real and true and fated 



  • Author: Saxon Crow (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 14th, 2021 00:33
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 28
  • Users favorite of this poem: Arvy, Poetic Dan.


  • Goldfinch60

    Beautiful loving words SC.


  • orchidee

    Slap and tickles?! I might swoon! heehee. Good write SC.

    • Saxon Crow

      Lol. Slaps will never happen. As long as I remain complimentary! Thanks Orchi

      • orchidee

        Friendly slaps as in 'S&T' - slap and tickle, as they say. But what do I know of it in me sheltered life? heehee.

      • Arvy

        "It's our souls that are embracing
        And kissing lovingly" even with distance people can still feel each other as if they're together. Beautiful dear, Sax!

        • Saxon Crow

          It's very true they can. How magical. Thanks for reading and commenting Arvy

        • dusk arising

          Now you've given me an excuse to write about my emotional flatulence.
          The wind and the widows maybe?

          Love hiccups, what a lovely idea.

        • Coyote

          This is so very beautiful Sax. Love it๐Ÿ™‚

        • Lorna

          This made me giddy!

        • Poetic Dan

          A well needed read my friend as I block those beautiful feelings out alot but you came like a wrecking ball or a little hiccup to remind me to see what I got!
          Fantastic as ever

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