If only the pain in my heart was ephemeral
Like the scent of Roses in a vase
Fleeting as they wither ever gently
Dropping their petals slowly in place
If only my heartache was temporary
Not a forever tattoo in my soul
This lingering pain could disappear
And happiness I could nicely behold
If only the pain in my heart was ephemeral
Like the passing scenery from a train
Just fleeting picturesque moment
Momentary like clouds dropping rain
- Author: Dove (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 14th, 2021 17:57
- Comment from author about the poem: Ephemeral- Lasting a very short time
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 32
Comments6
Very emotive words Dove may that pain soon leave you and become the love that you deserve.
Andy
Thanks you kindly Andy, much appreciated
It will lessen eventually, Dove - like water smooths a stone ....future events will wear it down to a small (even polished) memory with time......
Wait 'till that train leaves the station.....
Rich imagery in a neat write though.
Oh yes, I love polished stones! Thanks for the read and comment! Much appreciated
This could be relatable to many Dove, it breaks the soul when the pain that entered the heart takes time to leave. Hope you're safe and well!
Thanks Arvy, Iām doing good! Much appreciated! Thanks for stopping by
Your composing around the results from just one word arouses such empathy when pain riddles minds and hearts my friend - - "if only" indeed as your versed lament imagines such aches could be more momentary. Excellent read.
Thank you kindly dear Fay! Yes, I tried composing a poem from one word! Glad you enjoyed the read
Good write Dove.
Simples - for the pain to pass, stop listening to me singing! heehee. If only it depended on that....
LOL , the singing is a welcomed distraction! Thanks for stopping by
your words turned what was essentially a blank page into something really quite exquisite .. top marks my friend n truly ... š
Awe thank so much for a beautiful comment! Much appreciated Dear Neville
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