Chance.
That late afternoon
when the slope of well-muscled
shoulders approached
her slim frame and male breath
bent closer to trembling lips
refusal loomed large
for a guilt-ridden moment
then action exploded.
Chance of resistance can melt
as passion turns No into Yes.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A romantic notion took my fancy to wording a few lines of prose after viewing the image. Hope you enjoy.
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Oh cor blimey Fay, a bit contravertial. Us blokes have been getting a lot of stick for not hearing the NOs and imagining they are not meant thereby ending up in court. Not that humble, innocent, romantic littuw me ever would do anything like that of course.
On the other hand yes, I do see your lady melting here as the passion of her dreams approaches and..... well, as the saying goes, the rest is just toothpaste...
Innit awful when legal matters interfere with the romantic instinct.
Ha ha - Great comment and thank you dear Dusk - - glad you likened that meeting by Chance to toothpaste cos it certainly does fizzle with peppermint heat -- hearings in court were never intended in this little scribble but must agree that the words yes and no must be loud and definitely understood.
'Romantic notion'?
Come on Fay, that woz lust, not very pure but certainly simple.
On the basis of your evidence, they both enjoyed....'Nuff said...
Guzon wid ya Dave - - lust can be very romantic in my neck of the woods........... ha - grand to have had you stop by though for a read and review of Chance.
Seems like I missed out badly there, Fay. Should ha been in the wonderful West Country during my yoothful randy period rather than larking and lurking about London..,...
Wow! A very sensual write Fay.
I love it! Indeed Passion can turn any No to Yes, if the promise is a sweet tender kiss
So very true Fay.
Andy
Muchly enjoyed moments like that can catch a guy unprepared ... feels good tho' dunnit ............................ 🙂 x
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