River Spirit Senryu.

Goldfinch60



My River flows by

My Spirit sails upon it

And will forever.

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  • Laura🌻

    Andy,

    Your Spirit and your River
    will always be one.

    I enjoyed the read along with
    ‘O Mio Babbino Caro’.

    Have a wonderful day my dear poet.

    Laura🌻

    • Goldfinch60

      They surely will Laura, thank you.

      Andy

    • dusk arising

      We'll make a poetic narrowboat of ya yet.

      • Goldfinch60

        It will have to be a wide narrowboat d a.

        Andy

      • L. B. Mek

        to reunite, with
        your life's most cherished, presence
        love's undying, gift

        • Goldfinch60

          So very true Mek, thank you.

          Andy

        • orchidee

          Good write Gold.
          Aww, why ya turn back in your boat? Cos I was coming the other way and singing! lol.

        • Accidental Poet

          Long may you sail poet Andy. 👍

        • Poetic Dan

          I give you a nod each time a cross any river, forever to remember to stay a bit calmer.

          Thank you my friend

          • Goldfinch60

            Most kind Dan, thank you.

            Andy

          • Coyote

            Awesome! Love this Senryu Andy.

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Coyote, much appreciated.

              Andy



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