Giving attention to detail I find the swirls go round, often missing beauty right there on the ground
Taking in these moments I think I find the bliss, not something that can be taught or bought it just is!
Everything in nature belongs and is how it should be, once we find that centered prospective.
It's like our own unique puzzle piece of harmony but when we step back into focus it's about being honest with our needs.
To become shapeless and solid ready for each moment to exchange, little of this life is actions and mostly a mental game
Now I'm left with a choice, is there anything more to say....
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Not what I thought I would write but that's going with the flow....
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Hi Dan - so well expresses trying for centered perspective - I always find life is such a balancing act to try to stay happy and indeed that is a mental game...
All we can do is keep on trying as I to find it a constant battle for balance and yet I know that's not how its found.
Always appreciate your time my friend
Being in the flow is related to the water element ...
It’s nice when we can write in the flow without feeling stuck or confused
A good piece of writing
Absolutely just let it go wherever it wants to hope to catch up with yours soon!
Take care my friend
Always appreciated
'Taking in these moments
I think I find the bliss, not something
that can be taught or bought
it just is!'..
Amen!
indeed, its that mental wear and tear
we must be weary of
because that painstakingly achieved
moment of serenity
will pass us by, in a forgotten blink...
insightful, as always dear poet
thanks for sharing your wisdom
Painstakingly achieved! You know lifes journey well to see it can all pass by that blink of an eye!
Always a pleasure my friend
Yep, plenty more to say about the world around you i.e. away from self.
But yet I know this part of life so well and as not all days I can cope, I write always from self to never let go of the rope that holds me up.
Also I did think on sticking to the shell but the flow wanted to go somewhere else.
Always appreciate your time my friend
Being able to see the beauty and wonder of everyday things is what it's all about. Outstanding write!
Thank you so much, even if its only for a moment. I build on that lol
Always appreciate your time
Much peace and respect
Well penned Dan. 👍
For when a man
No longer confuses himself
With the definition of himself
that others have given him,
He is at once
Universal and unique
~ Alan Watts ~
Ooo I must of done well for you to quote my one of my heroes!
Truly made my morning and I've just got up!
Really appreciate good sir.
Have a fantastic day
Yes, Alan Watts, a brilliant man. And you a awesome day too Dan. 😉
Very good words Dan, life is so wonderful when we see it properly within us.
Andy
We can only keep trying!
Always appreciate your support and time my friend
I love it when your pen flows like this Mr. PD ...............................................tis super sir n truly ............................... Neville
Pleasure to always receive your star of approval my friend!
May we continue to let of poems flow free
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