That Ideal Place.

Goldfinch60



Does that Ideal Place exist

In my head, heart and soul?

That place where love,

Love and respect overcome,

Overcome all ills and battles

That are seen in this world.

A place where all are happy,

Always helping each other.

Never any animosity,

Never any sadness.

A place where love,

Love surrounds us all

And takes us to a place,

A place of comfort,

Comfort and peace to all.

 

Inside us all that place could exist

Leading us all into that ideal world

That we can share.

Share with all outside,

Outside of our minds.

That Ideal Place

Shared with all.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 26th, 2021 01:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: If only.....
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 30
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • Neville



    and what a nice thought, wish or dream that was ..

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you Neville, we can but dream.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      Good write Gold.
      Meanwhile - yep, such a place exists - where I'm not singing! heehee.

      • Goldfinch60

        Thanks Orchi.

        Yes very true.

        Andy

        • orchidee

          Or me going to a place Over the hills and......to sing?

        • Fay Slimm.

          A wonderful dream Andy - if only enough dreamt of peace it could become reality.

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true Fay, thank you.

            Andy

          • L. B. Mek

            ... if only, creativity can be manifested
            into a tangible existence of our everyday reality
            where we can freely share it, with those
            who lack it...
            not sure if I connected with your write
            or interpreted your message
            as you would have wanted, but still
            thanks for the intriguing read, my friend

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you for your fine comment Mek, as I said in my comment "If only....."

              Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              I believe it exists Andy, but only those who believe in it can get there. 😉 Great write Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you AP, very true, if all would learn about it.

                Andy

              • myself and me

                The Ideal Place does exist, unfortunately, it is not here where we live now.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Maybe one day mandm we can all find it.

                  Andy

                • Trenz Pruca

                  May you find that place,

                  • Goldfinch60

                    May we find that place Trenz then all would be well in the world.

                    Andy

                  • dusk arising

                    That place is often where i dream.It can be todays world, my yesteryears of even my fantasy woodland of elves and winged friends.
                    Great poem Goldfinch.

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Thank you d a, yes it can be any of these places if only we could all be ay peace with each other within that palce.

                      Andy



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