Does that Ideal Place exist
In my head, heart and soul?
That place where love,
Love and respect overcome,
Overcome all ills and battles
That are seen in this world.
A place where all are happy,
Always helping each other.
Never any animosity,
Never any sadness.
A place where love,
Love surrounds us all
And takes us to a place,
A place of comfort,
Comfort and peace to all.
Inside us all that place could exist
Leading us all into that ideal world
That we can share.
Share with all outside,
Outside of our minds.
That Ideal Place
Shared with all.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2021 01:16
- Comment from author about the poem: If only.....
- Category: Reflection
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Comments8
and what a nice thought, wish or dream that was ..
Thank you Neville, we can but dream.
Andy
Good write Gold.
Meanwhile - yep, such a place exists - where I'm not singing! heehee.
Thanks Orchi.
Yes very true.
Andy
Or me going to a place Over the hills and......to sing?
A wonderful dream Andy - if only enough dreamt of peace it could become reality.
Very true Fay, thank you.
Andy
... if only, creativity can be manifested
into a tangible existence of our everyday reality
where we can freely share it, with those
who lack it...
not sure if I connected with your write
or interpreted your message
as you would have wanted, but still
thanks for the intriguing read, my friend
Thank you for your fine comment Mek, as I said in my comment "If only....."
Andy
I believe it exists Andy, but only those who believe in it can get there. 😉 Great write Andy.
Thank you AP, very true, if all would learn about it.
Andy
The Ideal Place does exist, unfortunately, it is not here where we live now.
Maybe one day mandm we can all find it.
Andy
May you find that place,
May we find that place Trenz then all would be well in the world.
Andy
That place is often where i dream.It can be todays world, my yesteryears of even my fantasy woodland of elves and winged friends.
Great poem Goldfinch.
Thank you d a, yes it can be any of these places if only we could all be ay peace with each other within that palce.
Andy
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