Invasive.
Once installed Love arranges
its station,
becoming invasive
its action pours into every
emotion,
and objections despised
it streams
between parts hidden
and dried by fear.
Once Love impregnates
it raids
every blue-day,
negates anxiety, alleviates
unwelcome stress,
and penetrates moods
then all tainted memories
its forces remove.
Once in, Love decapitates
reasons
for feeling frustration,
permeates
dullness, resurrects
inner needs,
it invigorates weariness
and libido reveals.
Once here Love invalidates
distance,
takes no prisoners, ravages
lonely then
rouses vivaciousness
and exudes
bliss into each pore
because Love never loses.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: An oldie given another airing - - hope you enjoy.
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Accidental Poet.
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Comments8
An interesting choice of words Fay 🙂 I liked the read
Good to have your read and comment on Invasive dear Rose and so glad you found the subject interesting.
some love stories, are for Hollywood
with popcorn and picket fence happy endings..
others, are much more personal and evocative
made for that theatre of your mind's regret channels..
still, one way or another they both invade
and build a cinema, in your forehead
that's a little too stubborn, to dismantle and shed...
(a wonderfully quirky write, dear Fay
thanks for sharing)
Great to have your view on the subject of love L.B. -- yes it does appear in all sorts of stories and situations and has been used for the romantically inclined for years by Hollywood etc. and whenever the word is used it usually has with it the idea of it being invasive shows its powers. thank you for your welcome read and review.
Bravo dear poetess. This should be framed within the Halls of Love Museum. 🌹
Ah - the subject is worthy of many a poetic venture as to its true meaning and so pleased you found the read - framed or no ,so enlivening my friend.
Good write, Fay.
Love is (fill in the blank) add a metaphor. Understood in any language and culture.
Love flows eternal and so do the writings of Fay Slimm. This is an exquisite poem!
Yep, love beats us into submission and once we have succumbed it imprisons us and has its way with us upon its whim. So powerful.
Your opening line "Once installed Love arranges its station," so much in that line.... love is the BOSS lol.
Love is the strongest of all emotions Fay and can never be defeated.
Andy
this is probably my most favourite of poetic genres .. the kind with plenty of impregnating is defo my cuppa tea ..
and so deftly composed like only our Fay knows ............................. x
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