Perfectly stitched

myself and me

A broken heart

perfectly stitched together--

refused/failed to beat

  • Author: myself and me (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 26th, 2021 14:11
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 37
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  • Goldfinch60

    Emotive words mandm.


  • L. B. Mek

    because our stitches can never be lastingly concrete
    mere wrappings, to helps us regress the pain
    that continues to ache, just beneath our awareness;
    we must, instead
    address it - head-on, confront our mistakes
    and those frustrations that linger and fester
    before we can shed it all, and try
    to move on...
    (couldn't help relate to your write
    from my own past experiences,
    thanks for sharing

    • myself and me

      Your words are right at the point. It is not the physical form but rather the mental status that matters. It is always a good experience that a writing being accepted or understood in a resonant way. Thank you.

    • dusk arising

      Thank goodness stitches heal. After healing, the brain plays a larger part in what could harm the heart.

      • myself and me

        You are absolutely right. The brain knows better. Thank you.

      • Neville

        Aww.. this is such a sad little nugget .. but enjoyed immensely ................... N

        • myself and me

          A nugget could use a grain of salt. Thanks.

        • Quijote

          Yet stitches help the wound to heal with less scaring in heart and mind.

          • myself and me

            Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughtful comments.

          • Neville

            I just popped back to see if I could beat it ............. and I just couldn't ................................ Neville ..

            • myself and me

              What an effort. I am flattered.

            • Neville

              this is still up there among the best

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