A broken heart
perfectly stitched together--
refused/failed to beat
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Author:
myself and me (
Offline) - Published: August 26th, 2021 14:11
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A broken heart
perfectly stitched together--
refused/failed to beat
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Emotive words mandm.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
because our stitches can never be lastingly concrete
mere wrappings, to helps us regress the pain
that continues to ache, just beneath our awareness;
we must, instead
address it - head-on, confront our mistakes
and those frustrations that linger and fester
before we can shed it all, and try
to move on...
(couldn't help relate to your write
from my own past experiences,
thanks for sharing
Your words are right at the point. It is not the physical form but rather the mental status that matters. It is always a good experience that a writing being accepted or understood in a resonant way. Thank you.
Thank goodness stitches heal. After healing, the brain plays a larger part in what could harm the heart.
You are absolutely right. The brain knows better. Thank you.
Aww.. this is such a sad little nugget .. but enjoyed immensely ................... N
A nugget could use a grain of salt. Thanks.
Yet stitches help the wound to heal with less scaring in heart and mind.
Thank you for stopping by and leaving your thoughtful comments.
I just popped back to see if I could beat it ............. and I just couldn't ................................ Neville ..
What an effort. I am flattered.
this is still up there among the best
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