Pleasures.
What is deep I want fiercely.
What is heart-moving I need to feel.
In what is adventure I wish to partake
and live to fulfillment.
If time and chance allow me to dive
into experience I shall leave the shallows.
With wings boldly open
what is known as free flight I want to try.
I plan to learn the musical notes of life's
exciting symphony.
If there are tunes better than mood-blues
these I will start to sing.
So come forward potential.
I have mantra's mystique to re-invent lots
of sensory action.
With what are catalysts for energy change
I want an avalanche.
If love means completion I shall barter no
more and fall willingly.
What is bliss I intend to get by surrender
to the pleasures of living.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Glorious weather here today spawned this airing of celebration that though tweaked still gives the original feeling. Hope you enjoy
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Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.
And your exhilarating comment does just that for me Dusk- - am ready to join you in that run down the street singing to human existence. Thanking you muchly.
as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
Neville x
Glad to know you knew the feel of wanting adventure and enjoyed the burst of excitement it brings - - - and thanking you masses for saying so dear Sir N................x
Go for it with every fibre of your being........
Oh yay Dave - am already gone for it with every intention of staying up there on a high whatever life throws my way - - thanks a load for your encouraging comment.
A fine write Fay.
Bless you for stopping by for a read dear Orchi.
Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.
Was hoping the strength of passion for living would show in this ode to celebrate potential Sax - glad you felt the flow of energy I tried to convey.
May the pleasures you seek be the memories you keep. 😉
What a lovely and beautifully rhymed wish A.P, - - thanking you sincerely for your read and review of Pleasures.
Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.
What a wonderful world if we could always feel the pleasure in simply being to which this verse alludes my friend - thank you so much for your read and comment.
Thanks for sharing. You have a great week.
Experience is so important in our lives Fay as it cannot be taught.
Andy
So true Andy --experience comes first and thank you for this gem of wisdom too.
Go girl! Let the energy Fay flow!
A beautifully written poem full of joy..
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