Fay Slimm.

Pleasures

 

 

Pleasures.

 

What is deep I want fiercely.
What is heart-moving I need to feel.
In what is adventure I wish to partake
and live to fulfillment.

If time and chance allow me to dive
into experience I shall leave the shallows.
With wings boldly open
what is known as free flight I want to try.

I plan to learn the musical notes of life's
exciting symphony.
If there are tunes better than mood-blues
these I will start to sing.

So come forward potential.
I have mantra's mystique to re-invent lots 
of sensory action.
With what are catalysts for energy change
I want an avalanche.

If love means completion I shall barter no
more and fall willingly.
What is bliss I intend to get by surrender      
to the pleasures of living.

Comments10

  • dusk arising

    Oh boy this is an exciting verve coming from you today Fay. Yes there are days, times in life where we just want to run down the street singing the joys, encouraging all around to join in..... and of course, ready for love. The crown upon human existence.

    • Fay Slimm.

      And your exhilarating comment does just that for me Dusk- - am ready to join you in that run down the street singing to human existence. Thanking you muchly.

    • Neville

      as soon as I saw the title .. I just knew
      this was gonna be something very special ........................................... Enjoyed to the bloomin hilt my friend n true ....................................
      Neville x

      • Fay Slimm.

        Glad to know you knew the feel of wanting adventure and enjoyed the burst of excitement it brings - - - and thanking you masses for saying so dear Sir N................x

      • Doggerel Dave

        Go for it with every fibre of your being........

        • Fay Slimm.

          Oh yay Dave - am already gone for it with every intention of staying up there on a high whatever life throws my way - - thanks a load for your encouraging comment.

        • orchidee

          A fine write Fay.

          • Fay Slimm.

            Bless you for stopping by for a read dear Orchi.

          • Saxon Crow

            Stirring, bold and strong. I love this Fay. I can feel the strength of passion flowing from each verse.

            • Fay Slimm.

              Was hoping the strength of passion for living would show in this ode to celebrate potential Sax - glad you felt the flow of energy I tried to convey.

            • Accidental Poet

              May the pleasures you seek be the memories you keep. 😉

              • Fay Slimm.

                What a lovely and beautifully rhymed wish A.P, - - thanking you sincerely for your read and review of Pleasures.

              • The elder poet

                Awesome feeling shown here . A very nice poem. I hope you get those feelings fulfilled . You have a great Sunday.

                • Fay Slimm.

                  What a wonderful world if we could always feel the pleasure in simply being to which this verse alludes my friend - thank you so much for your read and comment.

                  • The elder poet

                    Thanks for sharing. You have a great week.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Experience is so important in our lives Fay as it cannot be taught.

                    Andy

                    • Fay Slimm.

                      So true Andy --experience comes first and thank you for this gem of wisdom too.

                    • Lorna

                      Go girl! Let the energy Fay flow!

                    • Floreann

                      A beautifully written poem full of joy..



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