the lake of time

dusk arising

beside the lake of time
sat ever thoughtful
traces of lifes journey
cross ribboned ripples
surfaces tease reflections
from depths cast aside
considerations evaded
judgements questioned
conclusions become temporal
as a floating leaf

 

a fish breaks the surface

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 31st, 2021 03:14
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Interesting words , dusk ) a good poem

    • dusk arising

      Thank you yellowrose

    • Neville


      every now n zen summat comes along and it makes me smile big ... and it aint often a fish sir .........N 🙂

      • dusk arising

        What was that play...... a fish, a fish, my condom for a fish?

      • Lorna

        Flows like time!

        • dusk arising

          Lovely comment, thank u Lorna.

        • L. B. Mek

          fish, can have that effect
          well, until fished
          then that romance, is all over with
          but dinner was memorable, at least... lol
          a wonderful edit

          • dusk arising

            Thank you LBM..... that damned fish.... something had to break the moment,

          • Fay Slimm.

            A scene to read and ponder on my friend -- the final line was just a perfect ending.

            • dusk arising

              Yep, somethig scaley got the last word.... but thats life!

            • Goldfinch60

              That break in life is just for a moment, then we move on into a better world.

              Andy



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