Suffocated by life's dream
No one to befriend or be
No games to play or see
Engulfed in the smoke of loneliness
Of life's unimaginable dream
can't flee its enticing shadows
Or its hold on life
Just stuck to it like life and nature
Trying again and again
Entangled in its lonely web
leave and again to come
Sign the card of loneliness
Don't see it as boredom or a silly attraction
See it as life's dream for eternity
Or broken dreams to be
Trapped in its lonely web
Plea for a message or two
A friend or enemy
A crush or desire
A passion like fire
For its raging desire
Can't it see the pain
And broken dream that's gone
Can't It see the sadness of life's unimaginable dream
The future is clear
And that is well said
Written in history
From unsolved mystery
Of who I will be
And the world will turn to see
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Author:
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Great writing as a first publication in MPS.😊
The last stanza I like most ❣
"The future is clear
And that is well said
Written in history
From unsolved mystery
Of who I will be
And the world will turn to see"
Thanks for sharing 😊
Thank you so much
a powerful, poetic voice
I see you've been writing for a while
look forward to reading your work
thanks for choosing to share
Thank you so much
IDK if your purposefully left the first “can’t” and “leave” lowercase or why you capitalized “It” (s5, l3) but it’s make it interesting. I also love your use of rhyme. Im not a rhyming person, so when I see it used in unique and not generic ways like you did, I really like it.
Thank you so much for reading the poem and for your comment.
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