Elsewhere.
Time was elsewhere
as two empty glasses and chairs
stretched around cups and plates
to complete a venture
Time was away
but they were there after long wait
for one planned face to face chance
of being together.
Time stood quite still
for after-lunch atmosphere to spill
gold on its glow as eyes told much
in unspoken pleasure.
Then time became timeless
as their fingers entwined.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 4th, 2021 05:28
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Comments5
a series of fleeting moments maybe .. but oh' my word, captured here so very well ... x
Thanking you Nev. not elsewhere but here and not fleeting but with meant sincerity for your ever-warm comments on my poetic efforts - - - am so glad you enjoyed these few lines on time by an incurable romantic .......... x
timeless, all love should feel this way
I really agree Ron - yes love should always be a forever feeling. Thanks for stopping by for a read.
you`re welcome
Lovely writing Fay 🙂
Am delighted you think so dear Rose - thank you for your visit and read of Elsewhere.
A candlelit dinner for two has such romance. Captured here undoubtedly.
The making of an evening with an air that lasts long into the sweetness of enchanting love.
Your lovely comment means the write has inspired your romantic side dear Dusk and if only for that I am more than delighted -- thank you for the warm glow your review has given me.
Beautiful loving words Fay.
Andy
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