Changes.
Sing me an ocean of sensual moments
where breakers of interchange
spray cold regions of aching emotion
with real expressions of give.
Croon me a river of romantic tunes
flowing with sentient sighs
as rising heartbeats end each move
to show gone pleasure exists.
Hum me a lake of whispered excitement
where passion runs naked
and kisses deliver the depths desired
to reach satisfaction missed.
Serenade me a carefully ardent sea
where desire changes inert to eager.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just been fancying what the hand in the above picture might have been writing. - -- hope you enjoy.
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Comments7
Beautifully poetic Fay. 😉
How kind and generous of you to say so A.P. So pleased you enjoyed Changes.
That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and passion to an unknown hand, ballpoint and pad, oh and a lowering sun….shame on you!
Ha ha - well they say a lady never shares secret faces and that is a truth in my book Dave......... but who knows in the future - well I might - next time - - maybe - - great to have your humorous review on Changes my friend.
'inert': indeed..
beautiful, dear Fay!
may that eagerness remain, evergreen
in our hopeful heart's
What a kind and thoughtful wish for hearts that are hopeful L.B. - thank you so much for stopping by for a read of Changes.
this shore is another one of your masterpieces my lady ..
need I say more ... no of course not .. he bows and waves leaving a x in his wake .......................................
Thanking eee gracefully for the bold X Nev which is wholly accepted as tasty levy for the read of my latest master - no - mistresspiece - -- and here I be sendin' another .............x
And I'm writing - well typing - with this hand - or two - a fine write Fay!
Thanking you doubly for your two handed comment on Changes dear Orchi - so glad you enjoyed the read.
Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.
Andy
No better place in which to write dreams than the sea my dear Andy - -thank you for your visit and read of Changes.
Dear Fay !! Very beautiful expression ..Good one...
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