Changes.

Fay Slimm.

 

Changes.

 

Sing me an ocean of sensual moments

where breakers of interchange

spray cold regions of aching emotion

with real expressions of give.

 

Croon me a river of romantic tunes

flowing with sentient sighs

as rising heartbeats end each move

to show gone pleasure exists.

 

Hum me a lake of whispered excitement

where passion runs naked

and kisses deliver the depths desired

to reach satisfaction missed.

 

Serenade me a carefully ardent sea

where desire changes inert to eager.

 

 

 

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 6th, 2021 04:11
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just been fancying what the hand in the above picture might have been writing. - -- hope you enjoy.
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 52
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet, L. B. Mek, Vamsi Sudha.
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Comments7

  • Accidental Poet

    Beautifully poetic Fay. 😉

    • Fay Slimm.

      How kind and generous of you to say so A.P. So pleased you enjoyed Changes.

    • Doggerel Dave

      That’s a cop out, Fay! – You’ve passed all that poetry power and passion to an unknown hand, ballpoint and pad, oh and a lowering sun….shame on you!

      • Fay Slimm.

        Ha ha - well they say a lady never shares secret faces and that is a truth in my book Dave......... but who knows in the future - well I might - next time - - maybe - - great to have your humorous review on Changes my friend.

      • L. B. Mek

        'inert': indeed..
        beautiful, dear Fay!
        may that eagerness remain, evergreen
        in our hopeful heart's

        • Fay Slimm.

          What a kind and thoughtful wish for hearts that are hopeful L.B. - thank you so much for stopping by for a read of Changes.

        • Neville


          this shore is another one of your masterpieces my lady ..

          need I say more ... no of course not .. he bows and waves leaving a x in his wake .......................................

          • Fay Slimm.

            Thanking eee gracefully for the bold X Nev which is wholly accepted as tasty levy for the read of my latest master - no - mistresspiece - -- and here I be sendin' another .............x

          • orchidee

            And I'm writing - well typing - with this hand - or two - a fine write Fay!

            • Fay Slimm.

              Thanking you doubly for your two handed comment on Changes dear Orchi - so glad you enjoyed the read.

            • Goldfinch60

              Beautiful words Fay of dreams being written by the sea.

              Andy

              • Fay Slimm.

                No better place in which to write dreams than the sea my dear Andy - -thank you for your visit and read of Changes.

              • Vamsi Sudha

                Dear Fay !! Very beautiful expression ..Good one...



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