I don't know if it's the only thing I'm good at or the only thing I'm good for
Each time a lesson is connected to another hidden door
The more I don't wish to go on, the more goings-on seems to happen
Until I'm lost in the cycle of another triggering pattern
Never to give in but relentlessly be at the tip of breaking
Looking for no meaning in the reason just to keep stepping
Trying to find the happiness in the harmony of lifes creation
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Doing what I do to keep finding clues, let know one tell you how or what to write too. Thought I add a beautiful song my amazing Jorja done with her friend, as is be lost without many friends with a pen.
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That harmony of life has been coming to you during the time I have read your writing on here Dan, you have come a long way and I know that you will move further into the wonder that your life holds for you.
Andy
It can feel so far at times my friend but I know you are right, it's here anytime I choose
I can never thank you enough for your time my friend
Always appreciated
We have to try find happiness ... in something I guess . Nice writing Dan )
Sorry to hear that your still feeling in a difficult place , I understand it’s not easy at all ...
All in our own time and always appreciate yours my friend
Sometimes I wander if the only thing I’m good at is poetry ....
Yep! I get that. Let's publish the books and dance with the pages on never-ending trip to the final show..
I only wish it paid but can you put a price on what feels just good for the soul
You can’t put a price on it ... no . It does feel good for the soul and mind ... agree with you Dan 🙂
Lovely song by the way 🙂 is she your daughter ?
Yep, this is her 4th song and each time I can't help but cry when I hear it! Love can truly be a beautiful kind of pain
I truly liked the song 🙂
I’m sorry Dan , that you’ve had so many difficult times in your life ... so have I .
I think life is more difficult for some than others ...
Bless you, I used to think that alot but now I see none of us have life easy. For we can only ever know part of any souls journey.
We all must do what need as long as we don't intentionally want to do harm. All emotions are our own. To own!
I don’t know . I think some people go through a lot more trauma than others ... which affects their life a lot . I’ve spent a lot of my life being affected by trauma , I’m in my thirties and I still seem to be missing out on a lot ... whilst the rest of my family receive more and more experiences
Emotions are difficult to deal with ... sometimes I find myself getting too involved in how I feel
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That great succinct shortie really got to me Dan - nothing there to sympathise with. I saw you as wrestling life with the energy to keep on doing so and energy to spare.
I read most of your stuff - even if I don't always comment, and I found this one very inspiring.
Buddy because of you I went back through found the typo and now feel pretty good!
It's the simple things that can sometimes please, getting a delightful message from you is another of these!
Truly grateful for your time and reflection on the wrestle I can't help but create!
Always appreciated
'Until I'm lost in the cycle of another triggering pattern
Never to give in but relentlessly be at the tip of breaking'..
this is you, at your free flowing Best!
stay Awesome my friend,
walk easy, because if you're fighting this much
with this level of dedication
then the outcome, is nothing but a gust of wind of chance
you, Sir: are doing all that's asked for you,
and setting a wonderful example for us All to follow...
in the words of the Great 'India Arie':
'I believe in open doors
I've taken off the screen
I'm ready to let the world come inside
And touch my life
I will no longer be defined by
What someone else believes that I am
Now that I have dropped the weight
I am light as a feather
It's time to elevate
Soulbird rise
Lift your eyes
Spread your wings
Prepare to fly
This is the moment
Of your life
Go ahead and fly'
I laughed so hard at the start of this as today I broke my car stereo and windows at the same time! All for the love of more bass, yet as I read you words I must remember to just take it one step at a time even though I swear I've learnt of to fly.
Thank you again for such powerful positive words to read and so honoured to the reflection of them is down in us all!
Have a fantastic journey my friend
The purest gift must surely be to be happy and content. Those who make that their hearts goal will be happy and content come rain or shine, come feast or famine.
So very true and how quickly I can over fill my cup with needles junk.
As always I'll gladly take on some of that wisdom and slowly move over to that lane.
Always appreciated your time good sir and hope all is well
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