Shark Cloud.

Goldfinch60



I looked up into the clear blue sky

Just one cloud did I see,

It looked like a shark

Swimming slowly in the light blue sky.

I just sat watching,

As is swam off to eternity.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 17th, 2021 01:12
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
  • Users favorite of this poem: Accidental Poet
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold.

  • dusk arising

    On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds go?

    Clouds really enhance the visual effects of any landscape/seascape effecting our inner feelings and how we relate to the world around us at that time.
    A shark is an analogy which got me thinking.

    • Goldfinch60

      Clouds certainly do enhance our feeling d a, and always will so.

      Andy

    • Fay Slimm.

      yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a good metaphor ending in a brilliant last line - thanks too dear Andy for the number I had not heard in years - Paul still had the appeal of perfect tone and audible linguistics..

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Fay, clouds are absolutely fascinating .

        Andy

      • L. B. Mek

        lots of sharks around us, at all times
        some symbolic
        most, very real
        but sharks are attracted to weakness, to blood..
        so its important, we strive to keep ourselves safe, at all times
        we shouldn't rely on the sympathy of others,
        but still offer sympathy to others when we can,
        that's the only, we get a shot
        at looking up and admiring the blue sky's, in our lives
        even, if only once in a while...
        (a wonderfully emotive quality to your poem today, inspired me to scribble a little reply, thanks Andy
        hope you have a great weekend)

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you for your fine words Mek.

          Andy

        • Accidental Poet

          Clouds, like watching a campfire can be very hypnotic and inspirational. Great write Andy. 👍

          • Goldfinch60

            Very true AP.

            Andy



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