I looked up into the clear blue sky
Just one cloud did I see,
It looked like a shark
Swimming slowly in the light blue sky.
I just sat watching,
As is swam off to eternity.
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Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 17th, 2021 01:12
- Category: Reflection
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Good write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
On a blue sky day with cotton wool clouds, where do the clouds go?
Clouds really enhance the visual effects of any landscape/seascape effecting our inner feelings and how we relate to the world around us at that time.
A shark is an analogy which got me thinking.
Clouds certainly do enhance our feeling d a, and always will so.
Andy
yes clouds can have many faces that change with the breeze or wind - a good metaphor ending in a brilliant last line - thanks too dear Andy for the number I had not heard in years - Paul still had the appeal of perfect tone and audible linguistics..
Thank you Fay, clouds are absolutely fascinating .
Andy
lots of sharks around us, at all times
some symbolic
most, very real
but sharks are attracted to weakness, to blood..
so its important, we strive to keep ourselves safe, at all times
we shouldn't rely on the sympathy of others,
but still offer sympathy to others when we can,
that's the only, we get a shot
at looking up and admiring the blue sky's, in our lives
even, if only once in a while...
(a wonderfully emotive quality to your poem today, inspired me to scribble a little reply, thanks Andy
hope you have a great weekend)
Thank you for your fine words Mek.
Andy
Clouds, like watching a campfire can be very hypnotic and inspirational. Great write Andy. 👍
Very true AP.
Andy
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