Let all emotions out on stage, let the centre hide no frame
For each that enters what's to retain no name
It was all but for the glory of an endless game
To know we was a part of what can never be explained
The meaning and purpose of it all being here in the first place.
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: As always I forget how inspiring this place is, again just going with the flow on this one! Always appreciated with much peace and respect.
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I really like it on here ! Nice writing , Dan 🙂
Thank you kindly my friend, here or there can be a big place. We just can't stay in one spot though or we may fade without a trace!
But you my friend are around even on the rain days!
Always appreciate your time
Keep up the shine
Ps thanks for the inspiration on the first bit lol
A fine write Dan.
Thank you for sir, have a good day!
Always appreciated
Oops, I looked this up. Some possible link to John Thomas, then, woof, Fido, my imaginary moral watch-dog barked, and said it will be too much for me! lol.
Too Much Info to say more of J.T.
Maybe you need to live on the edge a little, it can be fun...sometimes!
We should all be ourselves Dan and try and always improve to what we see will be good for us and for others in our life.
Always agree with you my man!
Have a good day 😉
that last line underlines and anchors it all: brilliantly,
not just todays write my friend
but close to everything I've ever read from you!
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
Ha ha, dito my friend! Always a pleasure to connect with souls that chime. Really appreciate your support, keep being you!
We're here because we're here, Dan - there's not much more we can know.
I feel that is the essence of your poem, Dan - do correct me if you feel I'm wrong.
Well others do say different and I can sometimes listen but mostly I guess so.
It's all down to the individual
Always appreciated
Much peace and respect
The second line throws me completely, or is there a typo in there?
Yep, my experience of literally being on stage was initially a bit of fright, followed by an act i polished and finally, just letting myself be me. But life is a stage. You, yes you Dan, choose just how you want the world to see you and there are loads of choices. Here's a couple. A working person content to be a part of a family unit nuturing a young child and enjoying their work. Or. All of the above but with a chip on his shoulder that he's reluctant to cast off for fear of becoming a nobody... which is clearly something he definitely shouldn't have to fear.
Definitely a chip and slower than I'd like maybe it will be polished away!
We are a part of it all...
As for the second line did you mean. "For each that enters what's to retain no name"
I think all the spelling is correct... it was not to label the emotion, just let each one have a moment in the spotlight.
Always appreciate your time my friend
Have a great weekend
OK m8, sorry for thinking it might be a typo, i just didn't get it. Happens in poetry all the time, i'm sure some of the stuff i post goes way over some peoples heads. Some times i get hardly any comments yet lots have stopped by read my words according to the number of 'views' shown. Mind you, i do get weird sometimes lol.
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