Calm or dead it's all the view in our heads
As I brushed my hair with my toes poem's flow
When the fox down the path heard the seagull laugh
The salt from air kept my face locked in despair
Yet the crab with it's claws knew how to even the score
Gone with the tide shells features begin to shine
In the spirit of imagination and all elephants in the sky
Remembering the hidden power of rhythm & rhyme
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: One more day to go! Special one tomorrow and this was my last morning walk before its just me and my crew for chilled week off! Playing around finding new ground but old time rhyming still helps break the frown. Always appreciated and keep up the shine, I also couldn't pick a picture for here so I shoved them all in. Hope you all had a great weekend!
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Great poem Dan 🙂 certainly a favourite , love your Choice of words . I hope you have a good day ...
Thank you my friend I hope you have too!
Always appreciate your time
Definitely catch up with your work soon
Like Neil I don't always comment and I've been away for a while so a treatt to return and read your latest gem - keep writing PD.
Well so good to see your wonderful spirit and hope all is well my friend and a pleasure that you see this as a gem.
I'm slowly on the mend 😉
Thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Hope the morrow goes well and then chill with the gang ......................... Neville
It will now I've been joined by you, me and the gang are ready no more hiding to do!
As you know sometimes you have to just let the pen guide you!
Thanks again good sir
Always appreciate your time
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