Rhythm & Rhyme

Poetic Dan

Calm or dead it's all the view in our heads 

As I brushed my hair with my toes poem's flow 

When the fox down the path heard the seagull laugh 

The salt from air kept my face locked in despair 

Yet the crab with it's claws knew how to even the score 

Gone with the tide shells features begin to shine 

In the spirit of imagination and all elephants in the sky 

Remembering the hidden power of rhythm & rhyme 

 

 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 19th, 2021 04:45
  • Comment from author about the poem: One more day to go! Special one tomorrow and this was my last morning walk before its just me and my crew for chilled week off! Playing around finding new ground but old time rhyming still helps break the frown. Always appreciated and keep up the shine, I also couldn't pick a picture for here so I shoved them all in. Hope you all had a great weekend!
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  • User favorite of this poem: Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose).
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Comments3

  • Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose)

    Great poem Dan 🙂 certainly a favourite , love your Choice of words . I hope you have a good day ...

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my friend I hope you have too!
      Always appreciate your time

      Definitely catch up with your work soon

    • Michael Edwards

      Like Neil I don't always comment and I've been away for a while so a treatt to return and read your latest gem - keep writing PD.

      • Poetic Dan

        Well so good to see your wonderful spirit and hope all is well my friend and a pleasure that you see this as a gem.

        I'm slowly on the mend 😉

      • Neville



        Thoroughly enjoyed my friend .. Hope the morrow goes well and then chill with the gang ......................... Neville

        • Poetic Dan

          It will now I've been joined by you, me and the gang are ready no more hiding to do!

          As you know sometimes you have to just let the pen guide you!

          Thanks again good sir
          Always appreciate your time



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