yellowrose

Today I’m in pink ,

Today I’m in pink 

Pink top , jacket , 

maybe like that pink line of the rainbow or the pink petals on a rose 

the outside of me , happy , vibrant clothes , pink

but me , today , most of today been feeling somehow tired , lacking in vibrancy and dull internally 

 

today I’m in pink , the outside of me vibrant like the petals of a rose 

standing out , my clothes atleast 

but somehow my internal world has been tired and felt like I’ve been lacking the pretty feeling 

 

it’s been a bit of a cloudy day inside of my world 

in my mind 

tired of the feelings 

a pink world living on the outside of me 

reflecting something that I do not always feel , beauty , vibrancy , fun , joy 

a girl like laughter living on me on the jacket and the top 

like the petaled pink rose and the rainbow so vibrant in this world 

 

and even as I write this I feel kind of dull internally 

and I’m not feeling the beauty of the rose or the vibrant fun feelings of the rainbow 

I just feel kind of flat and dull like the somewhat cloudy sky I see outside of my window 

and I just feel like there is emptiness living here that sometimes needs more beauty 

 

and the words on this page are helpful to me , because their giving me a chance to talk 

allowing the part of me to have their say 

and that’s nice 

helpful to speak of our feelings 

and that which may be hurting our minds and our days 

Comments7

  • Fay Slimm.

    Pink is a beautiful colour to help dullness dear Rose - thank you for another sweet verse to pleasure this reader.

    • yellowrose

      Thankyou Fay 🙂 it is a beautiful colour , such a contrast to feeling dull and tired . Appreciate your comment and support

    • Teddy.15

      who doesn't look pretty in pink? Its a beautiful colour and I especially love the bright pinks, you certainly brighten the page even if the actual poetess isn't feeling as upbeat. Another honest poem dear Rose. I imagine you look stunning in it even more so when you smile. 💖

      • yellowrose

        Hello teddy , Thankyou 🙂 I didn’t know what to write on so I thought start writing about the pink clothes ... I guess part of me wanted to express how I do not always feel “ pretty “ or “ good enough ... that’s just how parts of me sometimes feel , I guess I just wanted to express that upset of when I feel these ways how it makes me sad. And yeah I’ve been feeling flat and dull today .

        Thanks for your kind words ... I’m probably a bit critical towards myself and sometimes think I could look better .. I don’t always feel good enough ... even if maybe I should “

        I’m glad you like my poem 🙂

      • Teddy.15

        Rose all you have to do is lose the face strains believe that you look pretty and you will see infact you do, I don't know any women including myself who doesn't have doubts on a daily basis it's part of being a woman, trust me. A smile goes a long way also in the mirror. X

      • Thekkinkkattil

        This is how you cheer yourself by expressing what you feel and when others come to heal. A very good expression of your feeing Yr. Cheers for you

      • orchidee

        A fine write Rose.

      • Marie

        The color pink is thought to be a calming color associated with love, kindness, and femininity. You have inked a very fine poem around this beautiful colour, your reasons for choosing and wearing it! Lovely work! Thank you for sharing...

      • L. B. Mek

        from the title to the last line, I found this a thoroughly engaging read
        really like, how your poetic voice is growing more confident with every write you share with us
        a blossoming, is a beautiful thing to behold...
        thanks for sharing your poetic journey with us dear poet

        • yellowrose

          Thankyou Mek 🙂 that’s nice , how you feel my poems are more confident , really nice of you to say .. Thankyou )) sometimes I do doubt my writings, but not always

          Appreciate your support

          I’m glad you enjoyed the read



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