Bridges.
And when two minds strive
for need of forced win
love's hourglass tilts timing
for storm to begin.
Ahead lies crevasses where
hope falls, fades and dies
as only ghosts survive air
around two hot fires.
We once built trust on meant
rise by proceeding.
Let sense climb those bridges
and find it again.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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This is as near to perfect as it gets ..
a succinct message very much to the point and oh' so meaningful ... Not only that though, it looks so bloomin good pinned as it is to the page ........................ Bravo Fay ... x
Oh how you spoil me but I'm not complaining amigo - glad you thought the message was meaningful - - so lovely to get your avid support for my take on Bridges...........x and ,.........x
Amen!
What a grand assessment of my offering on Bridges and thank you profusely L.B.
Quite amazing how rifts can be bridged by the love on either side of a deep sorrow. Two again become one, healing as a wound closes over and no scar remains.
Yes I agree Dusk - bridges can only be built if there is love on both sides. thanks a lot for your wise reflections on the subject my friend.
Good write, Fay.
Forgiveness solid foundation for bridges.
I truly agree Jerry that forgiveness is so often needed to help keep relationships om firm ground.
My pedestrian political mind sees it as a motion to be presented at the United Nations....
Beautiful frameable piece, Fay.
Very inspiring write Fay. Reminds me of a song by a mother/daughter singing duo "The Judds". The song of "Love Can Build a Bridge".
https://youtu.be/bWdjRJGhYbs
So very true, those bridges in life MUST BE built together Fay.
Andy
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