was that you
were you there
when...
a sudden gust covered me
in pink spring blossom
yes, it was
you again
unforgettable
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dusk arising (
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A beautiful poem , dusk ... sweet words )
Unforgettable indeed d a.
Andy
Good write dusk.
I know I'm a little sentimental for your taste, Dusk
but bare with me on this one, lol..
there's a scene, in a film
titled the 'The last Samurai'
in which, the best character states about Spring's, perfect blossoms:
'You could spend your life looking for one, and it would not be a wasted life.'
then,
in the final scene of that same film
after this character has died, (having witnesses such a perfect blossom)
the films 'Hollywood' hero
approaches the Emperor, in which this conversation takes place:
Emperor Meiji:
'Tell me, how he died.'
Nathan Algren: 'I will tell you,
how he lived.'
(that's the feeling your words brought back to me,
it took Hollywood an hour or so;
it took you, three
ever so poignant, stanzas)
thanks for sharing, dear Poet
such a little message softly spoken simply screams of quality .. no kiddin
D.A.,
Your written words are delightful and most pleasing. Thank you for sharing.
Laura🌻
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