once there was spring

dusk arising

was that you
were you there
when...

 

a sudden gust covered me
 in pink spring blossom

 

yes, it was
you again
unforgettable

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 21st, 2021 00:02
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  • Caring dove

    A beautiful poem , dusk ... sweet words )

  • Goldfinch60

    Unforgettable indeed d a.

    Andy

  • orchidee

    Good write dusk.

  • L. B. Mek

    I know I'm a little sentimental for your taste, Dusk
    but bare with me on this one, lol..
    there's a scene, in a film
    titled the 'The last Samurai'
    in which, the best character states about Spring's, perfect blossoms:
    'You could spend your life looking for one, and it would not be a wasted life.'
    then,
    in the final scene of that same film
    after this character has died, (having witnesses such a perfect blossom)
    the films 'Hollywood' hero
    approaches the Emperor, in which this conversation takes place:
    Emperor Meiji:
    'Tell me, how he died.'
    Nathan Algren: 'I will tell you,
    how he lived.'
    (that's the feeling your words brought back to me,
    it took Hollywood an hour or so;
    it took you, three
    ever so poignant, stanzas)
    thanks for sharing, dear Poet

  • Neville


    such a little message softly spoken simply screams of quality .. no kiddin

  • Laura🌻

    D.A.,

    Your written words are delightful and most pleasing. Thank you for sharing.

    Laura🌻



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