Under the blanket nice and sung, we can watch the stars come one by one
Now the sun has gone away, the moon gets a turn to light the way
Be it happy or be it sad, let it all go up and you'll be glad
For far away in a distant land there could be nothing but dogs & cats
With all the milk and all the grub, on back of elephants swing trunk
Next door to a crocodile playing the wazzo riding a bike doing loop de loops
What happens next is up to you, just close your eyes and hum a tune.....
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sat and sung the start of this then made the rest up once she went to bed, sent the full audio to my elder daughter then cried a bit. A love like this will never die but it's never the same in anyones eyes!
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- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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Great writing ! Lovely words , Dan 🙂
Dan,
I’ve enjoyed this great poem of yours. I especially liked…
‘What happens next is up to you, just close your eyes and hum a tune.....’
…and that’s exactly what I’m planning to do—close my ‘eyes and hum a tune’!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful words…very uplifting and inspirational.
Laura🌻
P.S.-I would like to wish you and your precious daughter a belated HAPPY BIRTHDAY!
I agree with Laura ... it’s uplifting !
Maybe when were sad we should start singing , about to drift off to sleep and we could think of something really nice ... or try
The mind can bring the wonder of the world within us Dan.
Andy
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