Neville

Nothing to Lose

Nothing to Lose

 

Upon their eventual awakening

not one of them

dared in the slightest to move

and even as their eyes stayed

ever so lightly

half closed, a smile it did spread

across both of their faces

since neither had nothing to lose

 

 

Comments8

  • Fay Slimm.

    That eventual awakening so very sensitively portrayed brought a smile to my face this morn - delighted thank yous for that - and more........x

    • Neville



      it feels like we got ourselves another win win Fay ............................... thank you smilingly & BIG 🙂 x

    • dusk arising

      OOh I've had mornings like that. Nervousness pervades the atmosphere.... anxiety vibrates... eventually flatulence breaks the impasse.... but he's very forgiving... aren't you Neville.

      Great piece which did bring back memories and how the situations resolved themselves - some better forgotten.

      • Neville


        I tend not to bear grudges .......... parp .......................... thank you kindly DA, tis good to know I\'m not the only one ................................. parp ........................ 🙂

      • orchidee

        Good write N.
        I can't meet her. She is with someone. lol.

        • Neville



          Very sensible Mr. O ............................. however, I sincerely thank you for your perusal sir ... N 🙂

        • orchidee

          Good write N.
          I can't meet her. She is with someone. lol.

        • L. B. Mek

          'Know, thy Self'
          then all your choices in life, will be centred upon those principles, you hold true and dear, meaning
          even your mistakes, will have a level of humble decency
          that will never overextend, to indecency..
          so that 'morning after' scene of consequence
          may not have to appear
          as a nightmare in your dawning future's, realm...
          (an Inspiring write, once more you have me dancing, with my fingertips
          how well, you spark my imagination, dear Supreme Poet)
          what a gift you choose to share, thank you!

          • Neville



            .................................. thank you kindly L.B & ever so ... Neville

          • Laura🌻

            Neville,


            I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem.😊

            When there’s
            ‘Nothing to Lose’,
            why not indulge?!………no regrets to be had………savor the moment…………🤗

            Thank you for sharing.

            Laura🌻

            • Neville



              I am seriously thinking about taking your advice .. to consider anything but, would be a total no brainer .................................................. N 🙂 🌻 x

              • Laura🌻

                ‘Not ventured, not gained’………

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              • Goldfinch60

                That feeling is so wonderful in knowing that all was fine in their world.

                Andy

                • Neville



                  you bet'cha beak it was my friend ............................................... n truly 🙂

                • Teddy.15

                  Good morning dear Neville, this is serious emotional poetry my dear friend, what a gorgeous write. with the perfect ending. x

                  • Neville



                    Good morning Teddy, I think the fact you went back in time by almost a whole month and took the trouble to check out my little 'Nothing to Lose' scribble helped me to shrug off the bad head I woke up with this mane .. Now I'm wearing a smile as I prepare for another busy day .. Many of my most sincerest thanks are blown in your direction ............... x

                    • Teddy.15

                      actually the 24th of September is a special day for me, apart from that, i truly believe you have a magnificent muse, for writing your romantic stuff dear Neville. I truly enjoy reading them. x

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