The Tease
She gave him far more
than a glimmer
But then, so much less
than a glimpse ..
And although both his
eyes were wide open
He was
so hungry and blinded
By her false
vulnerability that she
So skillfully
portrayed and not
to mention of course,
The very
near nakedness
She chose to hide
nothing behind
Beneath the cheesecloth
all that glitter and chintz …
Comments6
What a linguistic and valid complaint about one so enticingly false to the name of vincibility yet so deserving of being called tease. - - - great stuff agen Nev.................x
believe me, I thought long n hard over the title Fay .......... thanks a million for stopping by my friend ... x
Should I meet her? Will she be too much for me?! lol.
I would give this one a miss too mate .. but hey, ya never know .. once bitten twice shy ....... ๐
Good write, Neville.
Met this goddess in many disguises. Am a sucker for the tease.
We never learn do we ................................. cheers Jez .. N ๐
Neville,
Teasing can be a very dangerous undertaking that can lead to an undertaker. My great grandmother recounted a story to my grandmother about a neighbor of hers that was drowned by her teaser.
Her motto:
(in Italian, of course)
โproceed with caution
(procedi con cautela)!
Thank you for sharing this noteworthy write.
Laura ๐ป
Very sensible in any language if you ask me .. but Italian does it every time .. give me a dirty Margareta any day of the week ...................................................................... N ๐ ๐ป
This can be so true in many circumstances Neville and can be hard to avoid.
Andy
Best be careful Andy ... better to be safe than sorry ......................................... ta for tapping into this one my friend .. N ๐
Iโll never look at cheesecloth the same! As always a great story
Hello Dove me luv ................ many thanks for stopping by .. and sorry for my late reply .................. have been very busy .............. Hope you are safe n well ๐
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