After.
And after that session
when breath became slower,
my head on his shoulder
lent calm to the question
of what would be best time
to say it's all over, then
my heart intervened by
its murmur of never.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: September 25th, 2021 04:52
- Comment from author about the poem: The intriguing movement of the chosen graphic set my canvas to picture what might have happened - - - hope you enjoy.
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Comments4
This is unbelievably good our Fay .. x
So glad you like it - shorter than normal but says what i hope the reader can feel..............x.
size aint everything .. or so I've been told ....................................... 🙂 x
Great, Fay.
Twist in a twist.
You got it in one Jerry - the twist where a heart decides a bit different from mind's conclusion. Thanks ever so for your perceptive comment.
Very good words Fay intriguingly written.
Andy
Thank you a load dear Andy for dropping by for a read of After - so glad you enjoyed the different style.
Love incarnate...
Hi Prem - - so good to see your name again with this perceptive comment - -- hoping all is going well for your gifted writing my long-time friend.
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