Wishful

Fay Slimm.

 

Wishful.

 

Dogged with mist

a darksome pool.

Froth covered,

dappled with dew.

 

Water pours

over stone loins.

Mud adorned,

moulding coinage.

 

Good-luck pond,

money swollen. 

Left behind

in wishful hope.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2021 04:25
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • Doggerel Dave

    Hi Fay- Thanks for your neat little piece.
    Now I fully understand what you (and certainly the above commentary interpreted you as) were saying….I think…..
    However (not to detract from your meaning at all) it evoked in me a different feeling , of polluted waterways caused by large corporations who left behind very small amounts of compensation….

  • Goldfinch60

    Good words Fay, may that wishful hope be with us all.

    Andy



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