Goldfinch60

Surprisingly More.



In our lives we have ideas,

Ideas of what we want in our life.

Many times those ideas come true,

But sometimes we do not,

Do not get what we came for.

But then sometimes we get more,

More than we hoped for.

Comments7

  • Marie

    I love the message in this beautifully poem, dear Andy. Gratitude is the key to abundance and if we are grateful for what we have instead of concentrating on what we have not, then we receive more than we hoped for. Lovely work! Thank you for sharing, dear poet...

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you for your kind words Marie, we need to be grateful for all we have in our lives.

      Andy

      • Marie

        Most welcome, Andy and yes, we do, dear friend...

      • CLM

        “But then sometimes we get more,
        More than we hoped for.”
        I like that. =)

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you CLM, yes sometimes it does happen.

          Andy

        • Teddy.15

          Dear Andy, you just took positivity to a whole different level. Yes sometimes it does happen. 🤗

          • Goldfinch60

            Yes it does Teddy, we are often surprised at what wonder lies ahead of us.

            Andy

          • orchidee

            Good write Gold.
            Yes, I got a thank you e-mail for doing some 'good deed'.
            And, yes, people get more than they hope for, though negatively, when I sing! lol.

          • Robert Haigh

            Yes, life is full of surprises, Andy. We have to take the good with the bad, and remain positive whenever we can.

            • Goldfinch60

              Very true Robert, positivity is my way of life.

              Andy

            • Accidental Poet

              So very true Andy. Great write. 👍

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you AP, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • MendedFences27

                So true Andy. Life is complicated and the variance is wide. We may or not get what we were hoping for. Lots of wisdom in a few lines. - Phil a.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you Phil, most kind.

                  Andy



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