We were the victims of frost bitten love
Too hot to not exist.
You looked at me, said those words
And I could not resist.
Starting with the little things
We somehow fell apart.
Between lonely days and all the lies
You slowly broke my heart.
Suddenly there was nothing
Not even a reason to try.
All that we should've would've could've had
Frozen with a lie.
Only left with icy glares
And words tinged with a frigid blast.
We were the victims of frost bitten love
Too cold to ever last.
- Author: CLM (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 3rd, 2021 15:24
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 29
Comments2
Good emotive words CLM. That warmth will come back and love will abound in your life.
Andy
Thank you.
'Between lonely days and all the lies
You slowly broke my heart.
Suddenly there was nothing
Not even a reason to try.
All that we should've would've could've had
Frozen with a lie.'
(wonderfully expressive and sincere, I cherish your accessible wording, making this that much easier to connect with,
lastly, I really appreciate how smooth the writing flowed,
a great read)
thanks for choosing to share
Thank you. Glad you enjoyed it. It’s one of my favorites.
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