Goldfinch60

Keep Walking.



We walk through our lives

Up hills that seem so long

And make us think they will never end.

Then we walk down dales

Where our lives become easier.

Sometimes we have to walk through storms

Where life becomes so hard,

But what you must do

Is keep walking through the storm,

As your rainbow will be on the other side,

And happiness in our lives will be forever with us.

Comments11

  • P.Parande

    Brilliantly put sir ,after reading your poem i think i found the poetic rainbow

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you PP, may that rainbow bring wonderful colour to your life.

      Andy

    • yellowrose

      Lovely words , Andy 🙂 I know I’ve been through some storms ... we all want to find that rainbow

      • Goldfinch60

        It is always there waiting for us yellowrose.

        Andy

      • yellowrose

        Wizard of oz is a great film .. Judy Garland is great in it

      • Teddy.15

        Dear Andy, yes sometimes we all feel we can't catch a break, but if we can hold on through those moments we can certainly feel the positive side after each storm, your words today are very healing and hopeful. thank you. x

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you Teddy, the positives are always there for us.

          Andy

        • Marie

          The ups and downs of life are very finely penned in this insightful poem. Going with the flow of life is so important, Andy and you have captured that so well. If we wish to have rainbows in our life we have to be tolerant and learn to love the rain, realising that we can't have rainbows without a little rain. Lovely start to my day. Thought provoking, with an excellent complementary video! Wishing you a very 🙂 Happy Monday 🙂 a very blessed and wonderful new week too - enjoy!

          • Goldfinch60

            Thank you for your kind words Marie.

            Andy

            • Marie

              Most welcome, Andy. Have a lovely, blessed day and enjoy, dear friend...

            • orchidee

              Good write and video Gold.
              Is Fido singing with her in the clip?!

              • Goldfinch60

                Thanks Orchi.
                If he was I would have had to mark it 18.

                Andy

              • Thekkinkkattil

                Thank you Andy. That is the spirit we are always in search of the rainbow. A nice poem

                • Goldfinch60

                  Thank you TKKK, the rainbow is always there for us.

                  Andy

                • L. B. Mek

                  Indeed, my friend..
                  one of my favourite film quotes, mirrors your sentiments, I feel
                  "Thomas Wayne: And why do we fall, Bruce?
                  So we can learn to pick ourselves up."
                  and when we're back up, well
                  that's when we dance in the rain, just
                  cause we can: Again... lol
                  as-ever, you gift my day with that essential injection of positivity, dear Poet
                  sincerely: I thank you,

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Mek. Let us keep dancing in the rain.

                    Andy

                    • L. B. Mek

                      I'll bring the brolly, lol

                    • 1 more comment

                    • Jon Nakapalau

                      Simple yet powerful message - inspired.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Most kind Jon, thank you.

                        Andy

                      • Jay-Lee Jane

                        beautiful words, you've left me inspired 🙂

                        • Goldfinch60

                          Thank you Jay-Lee, much appreciated.

                          Andy

                        • Jay-Lee Jane

                          beautiful words, you've left me inspired 🙂



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