I Fell in Love

The day I met you

I knew

You've had a hard life

I saw the tear stains on your soul

The burning in your eyes

I knew I needed you

I hoped you needed me too

From the day I met you

There was something different

Something special

You held my other half

I never knew my heart was in two

Until you showed me what you held

Though we each had only half a heart

Together we were whole

The day I said I do

I gave you all I had of a heart and you accepted it

We became one

Like teeth of a comb you filled in every gap

You soaked up all my tears and I did the same

You took my hurt away

Each day when I look at you, I know

I fell in love with you

Together we've made each other whole

  • Author: IamUnicorn (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 5th, 2021 03:02
  • Comment from author about the poem: Dedicated to my Wonderful husband. 😊 I love you Travis Aristidou.
  • Category: Love
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Mads, Accidental Poet.


  • Goldfinch60

    May that oneness of love go on forever.


  • L. B. Mek

    the beginning of this write reminded me of a song by the soulful
    Tina Dico, titled 'Glow', and lyrics are:
    'You were given nothing as a child
    Now that's a lot to carry
    You've been empty-handed all you life
    A heavy weight to carry
    Things could be different
    But it wouldn't be the same
    You wouldn't be the man I love
    Without this weight'
    (thanks for sharing,
    this reads like an intimate and sincere dedication)

    • IamUnicorn

      Oh wow. That too is beautiful. Thank you.

    • Accidental Poet

      This kind of love is very rare. And you obviously acknowledged that here in the beautiful write Unicorn. 😉

      • IamUnicorn

        Awe, thank you.

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