Loving you

I'm sorry for loving you 

More than I should

I know you don't feel the same

I know you're better than me

But I still feel this way

I don't know how to stop it

I shouldn't love someone

When they will never love me back

I shouldn't be loved

When I don't deserve it

You say you love me

I say it back

But we mean it in different ways

And I don't know how much more I can take

I'm not very strong

I'm sorry for loving you so much

  • Author: DepressedMess24 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 7th, 2021 00:08
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wish I didn't love them in the way I do.
  • Category: Love
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  • User favorite of this poem: Having hope.


  • Having hope

    I have no words to describe my feelings on this writing. Just love it...❤
    Feel it relatable 🙂

    • DepressedMess24

      Thank you so much! I'm still inexperienced with writing so if you have any suggestions I'd love to hear them!

      • Having hope

        I am also just a student and me too an inexperienced with writing. I can just suggest you read as much as possible and continue writing as much as possible. 🙃

      • Goldfinch60

        May that love be responded it time.

      • L. B. Mek

        'I know you don't feel the same'

        'I know you're better than me'..
        what's seemingly unattainable,
        doesn't equate to its superiority...
        maybe, if we were to shed our own sense of inadequacy
        well find that person much closer than we thought the were, initially
        and our feelings, reciprocated
        more frequently...
        (I really liked the bravery
        liked, the sincerity
        a wonderful read, thanks for sharing)

        • DepressedMess24

          he told me he might be aro/ace so uh- i highly doubt anythings gonna happen

          • L. B. Mek

            his loss then, in the words of Arianna
            'thank you ...Next!'

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