Life definitely comes with a wicked plan, yet nothing can prepare when their whole head is asleep in your hand.
From the highs that give you the energy to fly, the drops that are grounding past any thing left in front of your eyes.
Rolling into the crashes to keep moving any direction, popping any illusion of mastery completion.
To all the love in my eyes that could never hold everything enough, to the moments they roll over and look blankly past existence.
I'm glad to ride with every emotionally driven thought, until the day my ticket gets punched!
I'll keep living as if the whole world was for us
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Always crazy in my head but trying to find the time to let out the rhymes again! Light and dark days still got to love them all, hopefully catch up with all your work soon...always appreciate your time much peace and respect. Keep living it!
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Life can be cruel , Dan , I understand . Sorry if you are still struggling with how you feel .. I know it’s not easy .
This is a good piece of writing and you have some vstrong lines here )
I'm not in a good or bad place at the moment and finding out that's okay as truthfully every day has it all!
Always appreciate your time my friend
Ok . Better than feeling really bad . I guess your writing just sounds a little sad .. o guess all we can do is try tho I don’t think life should feel difficult , at least that’s my opinion anyway
As a big Bruce Lee fan I try to embrace many of he's teachings.. "don't ask for an easier life but the power to endure a difficult one" nature would really show this is best 😉
Well if the difficult had many beautiful times in it .., then yeah . But to me difficult involves a lot of sadness and struggles and that’s just no fun ,
I don’t know much about Bruce lee ... apart from that he’s in that martial arts film
He was truly way much more than martial arts but then a true form is mind body and soul "be water" he was not liked for the path he chose but did it anyway....
He's worth looking into if you fancy it lol
All the best
Shows what I know lol , yeah I don’t know much about famous actors . I have just looked up the quote about water and Bruce lee and it said about emptying your mind and adapting to situations , being for less and emptying your mind .
I do know that water is related to the “ flow “ state and to a certain chakra and. Abs be related to creativity I guess ..
Your ticket has a long way to ride before it it gets punched, you are certainly having more good days than bad.
Andy
Always appreciated my friend and one can only hope
Amen!
and I will keep reading and learning
my friend,
thanks for being
that, guiding beacon
to overcoming's: capacity
in allowing us to soar
as high as we can hope
as free, as we can forgive...
what a Brilliant message dear Poet, thank you!
(loved the picture, those mirror smiles
say it all, better than any words)
To many words to pick for a coherent reply but your energy is the air in between!
Forever appreciated
Thank you my friend
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