When I met her the sun came into my life,
It blocked out everything
And everyone else from my life.
The darkness had gone forever
And the light shone ahead,
Shone ahead showing us the path,
The path that we would travel,
Travel together forever,
Forever into eternity,
And beyond.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: For Joyce. The video shows the original take of Secret Love and it was done in one take.
- Category: Love
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Comments6
A fine write Gold.
It's Doris for me - 'proper' singing anyway, not some of this modern trash.
Thank you Orchi.
Yes she was a fine lady.
Quote from Groucho Marks "I knew Doris Day before she was a virgin!"
Andy
Beautiful!
it must be wonderful, to look up
and see and feel,
the warmth of the sun;
maybe lightyears, in distance
but a heartbeat away
in recollection's, soothing scenes..
thanks for sharing Andy
hope the Sun, visits
and lingers, for a while longer this weekend
my friend
So Kind Mek, I am so grateful.
Andy
Love like you describe fills my heart to the full that you and your darling will be ever together wherever your future is spent............. grand number you chose as an illustration of how you both felt,. and still feel.
That love will never fail Fay, think you for your kind words.
Andy
Nicely written....we all seek true and real love.
Thank you, much appreciated.
Andy
It doesn't get any better than that Andy. Great write and she's smiling on you. 👍
She certainly is smiling, if you ask anyone who knew her what they remember about her they would say "her smile".
Andy
I knew someone like that. 😉👍
Simply beautiful Andy ..
We all know it, so there seems that nothing else need be said ..
write on tho' wont'cha mate ... N 🙂
Thank you Neville.
Oh yes that writing will never end.
Andy
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