A Formal Study of Her Knees
In the sun like that
He couldn’t help but marvel
At the way
They both seemed to glow
Like early morning alabaster
And later
Like twin bronze patinas
A smile then formed
As he took
His first sip of breakfast coffee
And watched her place
A tiny drop of sun cream
To the fore and aft and crown
Of those perfect knees of hers
And just to rub it in
He did then swear she had
The most amazing patella’s ever
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Neville (
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Good write N.
Did he swoon?! heehee.
I think he most probably teetered .. just a little maybe ......................................... N 🙂
Ha - well I guess that never before have knees been so poetically reviewed and found beautiful. Big smiles at what love can inspire mon romantic ami.
Thank you dear Fay ............................ I think maybe I had one too many raki's or summat 🙂 x
May those knees be forever there for you Neville.
Andy
Let's hope so .. ta Mr. GF60 🙂
Back for a second read and may I suggest next time a look at the elbows - they have more dimples than knees !! Ha - Love the picture of sun-cream to fore and aft of those amazing patellas..........x
two shots for the price of one eh' ................. priceless my friend I am both honoured and truly grateful .. oh' and on behalf of these words, I thank you ................................. x
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