Breathe

Neville

Breathe

 

Breathe

one more time my love

I just need

to hear you sigh ..

Breathe

one more time for me

my love

I need to see

your chest and belly rise

In time

with those gentle

undulations ..

Like two

fallen sparrows might

In their

single quest to taste the sky

 

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  • Caring dove

    I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )

    • Neville



      thank you so very much yellowrose ....... ever welcome and of course, always appreciated ... N

    • orchidee

      Good write Neville.
      Might I swoon?!

      • Neville



        You may indeed .................................................................................... 🙂

      • Fay Slimm.

        Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x

        • Neville



          how extraordinarily kind of you my lady ................................................................... x

        • L. B. Mek

          Brilliant!
          by the end, I feel like reading your poem
          is like a car ride, and all I need to do
          to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
          is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
          dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
          flowing within the syllables of your memories
          and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning's, I once took for granted in my own life...
          (ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
          write's like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
          thank you! my friend

          • Neville



            and You my very dear Mek are far too kind .. N

          • Accidental Poet

            A beautifully romantic write N. 👍

            • Neville



              I am so glad you dropped in & gave my little scribble the thumbs up AP .. much appreciated my friend .. Hope you & yours are all safe, sound & well .. N 🙂

            • Goldfinch60

              Beautiful words Neveille.

              Andy

              • Neville



                and I am both honoured and grateful that you smile down upon them so favourably Andy .. many thanks my friend ...................................................................................................................... Neville



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