Breathe
Breathe
one more time my love
I just need
to hear you sigh ..
Breathe
one more time for me
my love
I need to see
your chest and belly rise
In time
with those gentle
undulations ..
Like two
fallen sparrows might
In their
single quest to taste the sky
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: October 18th, 2021 03:34
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- Users favorite of this poem: L. B. Mek, Fay Slimm., Accidental Poet.
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I like this poem , especially the last few lines about the sparrows )
thank you so very much yellowrose ....... ever welcome and of course, always appreciated ... N
Good write Neville.
Might I swoon?!
You may indeed .................................................................................... 🙂
Breathlessly tasting that oh so romantic scene so sensuously scribed mon ami - and am giving it best place in my list of faves.....x
how extraordinarily kind of you my lady ................................................................... x
Brilliant!
by the end, I feel like reading your poem
is like a car ride, and all I need to do
to connect with all those nuances you subtly weave,
is just roll down the window and stick my arm out
dip and sway with the wind, like I too can exist
flowing within the syllables of your memories
and arrive, at the recollections of similar scenes - yearning's, I once took for granted in my own life...
(ah, I simply bow to your poetic supremacy!
write's like this, is why I consider myself a fan of your poetry)
thank you! my friend
and You my very dear Mek are far too kind .. N
A beautifully romantic write N. 👍
I am so glad you dropped in & gave my little scribble the thumbs up AP .. much appreciated my friend .. Hope you & yours are all safe, sound & well .. N 🙂
Beautiful words Neveille.
Andy
and I am both honoured and grateful that you smile down upon them so favourably Andy .. many thanks my friend ...................................................................................................................... Neville
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