Dirty Laugh
He loved it when she let him hear
that dirty
laugh of hers ..
The one she saved for
special lovers
and moments such as
those
she freely shared
throughout
the beaches bedrooms,
bars and the
balconies of Hydra, Ithaca and Crete ..
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Author:
Neville (
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Part of the magic in these tantalizing lines is your uncanny ability to bring to life your chosen characters. I almost heard that special laugh which reminded of someone summers back..........x
.............................. Shhh, I thought we agreed to keep that a secret .................................................. x
Ha - - Whoops and Drat for letting out that feral but now remembered virtual cat...........Well woe is me for forgetting that .............x
aaah, the truth comes out. My lips are sealed. 😉
Poetic licence AP ................................. Cheers tho' n truly 🙂
I fell for a stunner in Amsterdam
she chased/followed me across the pond to dear old London,
but then she found the jazz bars and that alluringly gltizy, night scene
and I was left daydreaming
of could-have-been's
back, waiting
at the empty fishing hooks, of Amsterdam's: bricked-in
aesthetic rivers - of ill-fate...
(yeah, I think
we might have a common experience in our past, dear Poet
and I thank you for inspiring my little scribbled reply) lol
this plagued gift, titled Poetry
where we have to dredge-up, all our repressed - unseemly
in the name of Art...
why am I not surprised .......................... thank you so much for your always far too generous consideration and opinion my friend ... N
A fine write Neville.
Was hers a 'tee hee' or a 'hee hee' or a 'lol' laugh?
And why am I talking rubbish?! (lol).
made me smile though so ya did ............... cheers Mr. O 🙂
It may have been a 'rofl' laugh. Was she rolling about on the floor laughing? if so, I won't ask why, or I will swoon! lol.
The difference between a "laugh" and a "dirty laugh" is that the latter is accepted with pleasure. To find so willing a "laugh" charmer is most fortunate. To reveal it here in such a poetic form is very skillful and shows how tiny things can make a moment into a memory. - Phil A.
What an unexpected but nevertheless wonderful review .. Thank you so much Phil .. Hope you and yours are all safe & well sir ............................. cheers, from a most grateful Neville
That laugh has been in my world in the past Neville, but a very long time ago.
Andy
........... Of that, I have no doubt ... nor do I doubt the accuracy of your most magnificent recollections, or the fact you will again hear and also share such dirty laughs again my fine feathered & golden friend ............... Neville
Dirty laugh, oh my , is that a coquettish pleasure ringing in thy ears!
Or a devilish wonder!
Mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm I wonder too my Dove .. but because you have just spoilt me rotten, I could forgive anything ... well almost ............................... 🙂 x
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