A Diamond in The Making

Neville

A Diamond in The Making

 

The carbon footprint that you leave behind today

but try so hard to hide, is set to become 

a diamond in the making, of some future lovers mind

 

 

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 22nd, 2021 03:01
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 46
  • Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻, L. B. Mek
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  • Caring dove

    I love this ! Nicely expressed )

    • Neville



      and of course, I love the fact you love it ................ Thank you dear yellowrose N 🙂

    • dusk arising

      Nice one Neville. I hate to think what my gallstones will turn out to be now that I've invested in a ULEZ car.

      • Neville



        Ouch ................. I dunno either, double ouch ..... maybe 🙂

      • Laura🌻

        Neville,

        Beautifully stated my dear friend.

        Laura🌻

        • Neville



          Thank you kindly and ever so very muchly Laura ....................................... 🌻

          • Laura🌻

            You’re most welcome!🌻

          • Fay Slimm.

            Good advice for a growing heart is this wise three liner. Diamonds are best when looking for value in making relationships..........x

            • Neville


              I dunno whether you have heard the expression 'Diamonds are a girls best friend' ... Well just for the record, she obviously hadn't ............................. Ah' well, onwards n upwards ......... Bless ya our Fay 🙂 x

              • Fay Slimm.

                Answering your comment re. the expression Well of course I have heard of it and thought about Monroe's great number as I was reading through your innocent's ignorance of love's jewels to come............... bless ya too for postings that stay long after the read......x

              • orchidee

                Good write Neville.

                • Neville



                  Well that's all write then .......... cheers Mr. O

                  • orchidee

                    It is all right for 'e'ermore' and for 'alway'. Aww, why a publishing organisation make such a hoo-hah about me using 'alway'? Ain't they heard of poetic words? I alway now part company with them. Doh!

                  • L. B. Mek

                    oh now for the real - real, deep poetry like this
                    I gotta save it for my nightly reads
                    so I can muse over it
                    delicately, in-between
                    conversational distractions and that distracting, clink
                    of expensive flavoured, melting ice cubes;
                    yes, I need that ambience
                    to be tempered, just right
                    to do such depthless words, justice...

                    • Neville



                      single malt flavoured melting ice-cubes tend to do it for me .. cheers Mek n truly ... Neville

                    • Goldfinch60

                      That diamond will always be there Neville.

                      Andy

                      • Neville



                        Cheers Andy .............. I sure hope you are write mate ...................... Neville 🙂



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