Love soft as a sweet potato sky
Three geese lumbering in formation
Eastward towards the sound.
I know enough about precious.
To bide here at this moment,
For longer than a while
When you write about it and you will
Don’t weigh it down
With metaphor and symbol.
Remember I was here
And I love you.
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Author:
Jerry Reynolds (
Offline) - Published: October 22nd, 2021 08:35
- Category: Love
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- Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., Caring dove
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Comments5
A gem of a tender romantic read Jerry - from the title onward your words capture the softness of love in flight - must have this bit of treasure for my list of favourites
Thanks, Fay.
Was writing to Aphrodite herself on this one.
Really like this ! 🙂but isn’t it sweet potato , not sweat potato ? I thought maybe it was supposed to be sweet unless I’m wrong ?
Great writing , anyhow .
Thanks, Yellowrose.
Yep, good catch.
Good write Jerry.
Thanks, Orchi.
Beautiful romantic words Jerry.
Andy
Thanks, Andy.
absolutely brilliant sir .. I really love this ........................ Neville
Thanks, Neville.
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