Magnificently Flawed
Although
at first she seemed
beautiful, yet small, like some
little gem perhaps, it very soon became
more apparent to him that she had more flaws
than both the Empire State Building and Post Office towers ..
Magnificently Flawed
Although
at first she seemed
beautiful, yet small, like some
little gem perhaps, it very soon became
more apparent to him that she had more flaws
than both the Empire State Building and Post Office towers ..
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Wow … someone with so many flaws … it sounds like the flaws are really revealing themselves .
A good poem , Neville
Good mane my friend & thank you for being so quick off the mark ... Yes absolutely, folk can be so deceiving can't they .. I can easily forgive those who are that way without knowing it, or for some other legitimate reason .. It is harder when folk deliberately try to create certain impressions and while the world is absolutely full of em, I know someone who fits the bill completely ....................................... Neville 🙂
All those flaws combined?
Yes some people cannot be trusted for so many reasons sometimes.
Andy
Sadly so bloomin write ............................ and she could have floored me with a feather 🙂 cheers Andy .. N
Flaws alright
Imperfections be treated with kind
But how to tolerate those who keep converted their flaws
To act fakes all time
Well crafted dear poet
In short lines
You conveyed the masks people carry nowadays
What an absolute pleasure to find a new face visiting my little scribble this fine morning .. Many thanks indeed spilleronsheet .. Many thanks to you and of course, you are always welcome ..
All Good Things, Neville
My pleasure dear poet to read your poetries
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Wow - the timing was great if found out not too late the lady was not what she seemed - -- wise weekend read my friend............x
She certainly wasn't what she professed to be Fay, I dont mean she was a fella or sumfink like that but she certainly was not as sweet, kind or mature as she made out and many believed her to be ..................................................................................................................... Have a great weekend my friend ... x
Oh how I laughed.......... so funny - thank you.
I guess that's another win win then .........................Oh' tis bloomin great to see you here Lorna .. thank you so much for dropping in .......................... Neville
Gotta meet her!
See ya later when I've met her. lol.
Let us know how you get on .. but don't ever say you were not warned beforehand ........... N 🙂
I step into territory - unknown? Or do I know it as a dark horse?! lol.
Not to mention the huge Gorilla swinging on her apex.
Great description of some of the time wasters out there, my radar has become finely attuned.
I thought we agreed not to mention the G word DA ................................................... attuned radar is very much of the essence these daze innit .............. Many thanks for continuing to reinforce my delusions my friend ................................................... Neville
Neville,
Ahh…those first impressions can be so deceiving…so much packed within a few lines…
Another great one my dear poet.
Laura🌻
You are absolutely write my very good friend .. thanking you dearly for this latest visit and for making this page feel special xx .............................................................. Neville 🌻
2-4-6-8 who do we appreciate ! Great formatting!
Hope one of the flaw,s, was she was too affectionate, lol
is that even possible 🙂 I am a bloke after all 🙂 an oldish one maybe, but hey ho there's still some life in the old dog yet .............................................................. I am beginning to feel overwhelmed by your generosity today my friend ............................................. thank you for all the attention you have lavished on my little scribbles thus far .. How ya managed to do that without waking me is amazing ................................................................................. 🙂 Neville x
You’re welcome!
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