Making Plain.
At times new events can mystify tidiest minds,
turn topsy-turvy accepted norms,
toss sky-high
respectable long held conclusions then jumble
normal routine until, irretrievably,
sense becomes tumbled.
Change in traits scramble an unprepared brain,
life becomes altered, time patterns
are never the same,
confusion reigns until answers start making
plain crazy questions of "why" which
battle relentlessly with
unsought-for acceptance that blasting
apart reliance on convention can
happen abnormally fast.
At last lucid clarity appears and moving above
clouds of doubt release happens
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when logic agrees - - - you have fallen in love.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
Offline) - Published: October 28th, 2021 02:29
- Comment from author about the poem: Back by request - -- hope you enjoy.
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Comments9
So true Fay.
Andy
Sure is true methinks Andy - thanks masses for your read and comment.
… interesting way with words . I like it 🙂
Glad dear Rose that you found the verse interesting - love is next to crazy sometimes methinks
what a captivating first line
as our enticing introduction,
to a wonderful poem, dear Fay
Your support is so appreciated dear L.B. - and pleased I am that you found the first line of Making Plain had captured your interest.
The endorphins are going ten to the dozen. I would say you're in love.
You hit the right nail with the mention of endorphins where love is concerned Paul - - thanks a load for your visit and comment.
Cor blimey, so that's how the female brain fathoms out love or not is it? I get on better with animals, now i see why.
I am a typical male and...... remain confused.
Ha ha - - you cannot hide being a romantic behind being confused my dear male friend - - love is not only for females to fathom as you will agree - - so glad to see you better enough to make wry comments again - smiles and hugs galore - - Fay
Good write Fay.
Thank you sincerely dear Orchi.
By jove, I do think she's got it .. How bloomin splendid our Fay .. this is one I dont recall .. absolutely delightful .. x
Merci beaucoup and glad you enjoyed crazy made plain monsieur - 'tas 'appened to us all one time or tuther eh ?.................x
Logic, step sibling of emotions, falters and succumbs in the presence of love, as so portrayed by these poetic words.
Ah how logic falters in the face of love's force as you so rightly state Suresh - thanking you most sincerely for this comment on Making Plain.
My Dear Fay,
I love your poem in its entirety. I especially like…
‘At last lucid clarity appears and moving above
clouds of doubt release happens’
Laura🌻
Many thanks for stopping by for a read of my few lines on romance and that you enjoyed its wording. and how kind of you to say so too in these warm comments dear Laura - -
You’re very welcome, my dear poetess!🤗🌻
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