I sat with the sea to write poetry, wondering where the love had gone inside me
Closing the eyes in search of a thought of a rhyme, only thunderous roars occupied my mind
Nothing more could be done but stop...
What is this.
A light so strong that all I could do is stretch right out and up! As if it pulled me, with no hope of every being next to it, yet warming my very existence and making all things shine.
I walked back pleased as for love can't define this, to truly be one (for a bit) with a single beautiful word
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Truly fantastic!
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Happy Friday my poetic friends this week has been crazy and doesn't look like stopping! I was feel stressed on Wednesday and couldn't snap out of it so when to the beach... the rest is here and history lol
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Sounds very much like a spiritual thing which happened to me with the light.
I think you were just shown your guardian angel my friend. That light and it's moment will never leave you if i am correct.
Stay well to you and yours my friend.
I'll be honest it was just the sun coming through and nothing can ever replace that feeling, even more so when you didn't expect it.
I will even cross a road to walk in that light and do glad to read if your beautiful experience.
As soon as I arrived in the spot with no wind, perfectly picked. I sat with my one bottle of beer and always tip the first bit and said a few names, those spirits never leaves us.....I guess until we rejoin, I'll happily wait to find out.
Always appreciate your time, take care buddy
Makes me think of angels or the light of your higher self maybe ?
Great writing Dan 🙂 nice to see another poem from you
Bit if both maybe my friend, I do love the sun in these chiller days!
Always appreciated your time
The sun is so nice ! It’s quite windy here today , and cloudy ..
I very much believe I’m angels and the comfort they can send us .
Our higher self is so loving ,., never to doubt our worth
indeed, just like your ecstatic words of rhyme
celebrating, those simple gifts of life..
(a rejuvenating read, my friend
thanks for sharing
and alerting us:
to that sunshine behind our clouds)
Ha ha. So glad I was alerted to mine and hopefully I can hold on to it a bit longer, maybe for the whole weekend. That would be nice...
Thank you as ever and keep up your shine my friend
Looking for nature's help can do marvels when feeling low dear Dan - I love the video and thanks for sharing your happy experience.
May that light be forever in your life Dan and the darkness fades away.
Andy
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