Eternal River.

Goldfinch60



I hear the call,

The call of My River.

I reach its edge and look down,

Down into the green depths.

And there I see the wonder,

The wonder and beauty of life.

I walk beside it,

The poetry of its beauty

Coming into my heart.

It means so much to me,

It has become My Spirit

And I know that as I walk with it

My Life will be filled with love.

The further I walk

The more I see of My Life,

Both passed, present and future.

I look forward and see her,

See My Lover waiting for me.

As My River fades into the future

My Life continues,

Continues when I come to her

And Our Spirits combine,

Combine into one.

We can be together for eternity

Where I look back at My River

To say thank you once more

For bringing us back together.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 30th, 2021 00:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: My River is so important to me as are the words of the song.
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 46
  • Users favorite of this poem: spilleronsheet, LaurašŸŒ».
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Comments15

  • dusk arising

    The spirit of your river combines with your spirit i feel here.... reinforcing your faith onward.

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you d a, yes My Faith is always reinforced along My River.

      Andy

    • orchidee

      A fine write Gold.
      There's a River in Psalm 46, and other Bible verses!

      • Goldfinch60

        Thank you Orchi.

        Yes there are, but not My River.

        Andy

      • spilleronsheet

        Very beautiful
        And so inspiring
        Romantic it is, but it tells me and gives me hope to meet the desired one
        It can be a person or accomplishment, giving me hopesā€¦

        • Goldfinch60

          Thank you spilleronsheet, I know that My Joyce is waiting for me.

          Andy

          • spilleronsheet

            She sure is watching you

          • John Prophet

            Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

            JP

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you John, much appreciated.

              Andy

            • Jerry Reynolds

              Beautifully written, Andy.

              • Goldfinch60

                Thank you Jerry, much appreciated.

                Andy

              • John Prophet

                Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                JP

              • John Prophet

                Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                JP

              • John Prophet

                Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                JP

              • John Prophet

                Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                JP

              • SureshG

                your words prove, true love is never parted

                • Goldfinch60

                  Much appreciated Suresh, thank you.

                  Andy

                • John Prophet

                  Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                  JP

                • John Prophet

                  Wow, one of your better efforts I think.

                  JP

                • LaurašŸŒ»

                  Andy,

                  Ah yesā€¦
                  your River and your beloved Joyce.
                  One day you will be together againā€¦
                  together forever. The love for each other that lives on infinitum.

                  LaurašŸŒ»

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Thank you Laura, yes I know that we will be together again for eternity.

                    Andy

                  • Mystic_isles

                    This poem is so beautiful and mesmerizing, the way it expressed the emotions it's beautiful

                    • Goldfinch60

                      So kind Mystic_isles, thank you, much appreciated.

                      Andy

                    • James Alexander

                      Very nice. Our lives are much like a river flowing ever forward to it's final destination.

                      • Goldfinch60

                        Thank you James, that is very true.

                        Andy



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