It’s painful
when dreams shatter
it’s painful
when bubbles you make
burst at the touch of reality
it’s painful
When your desires
appears to be mirage soon
it’s painful
when those who praised you
suddenly depart and runaway leaving you behind
it’s painful
when your loved ones
don’t believe in your ambitions
it’s painful
to stand all alone
mustering up courage
to those who stood for taking claims
claims in your win
but the same abandon you
when you fail
why should one bear
the burden of fall
all alone
why this hypocrisy dear world
Is aloofness the only solution
maybe not
maybe the key
The key is detachment
to be spiritual
to not acclaim the fruit
but concentrate on blooming instead
maybe it’s not atheistic
it’s about necessity
that keeps the heart throbbing inside
finding the purpose of life
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- Comment from author about the poem: Trying the best to revive..but at times peace isn’t outside but it has to be inside
- Category: Reflection
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such insight is a wonderful gift .. but at what cost the pain of knowing ..
not only a great poem my friend, but in the write hands, a splendid teaching aid too ... N
Thank you so much Neville
At times I wish if roses could be felt without thorns
Why to bear so much pain after all ?
Pain seems unavoidable on this world's indifferent stage of hypocrisy where aloofness holds centre stage - - a read for my list to read over again and thanks for sharing.
Thank you so much dear Fay
It means a lot hearing from you
Your Poetries have great insights
And to come into your pages, it surely means a lot
When you fail, you fail alone.
Is that what they say.
Yet, I would say, no failure, no success.
Well I witnessed the fall was faced alone
But what is failure, what is success
Nothing is impermanent
You are very spiritual Poet !! I can read between the lines !! Touching one indeed !!!
Thank you so much Vamsi
Well expressed poem . Your right these things are all very sad and painful and why should we have to deal with things alone . I am sorry you are hurting . I can relate to some of these ferlings
Thank you little dove
I might be alone wen I need to suffer
But thanks to the community at mps who are backing me up with cheer and encouragement which gives me immense power to fight once again
May that blooming within you be forever there and your life becomes wonderful.
Andy
Thank you so much Andy
I just hope despite having faced so many pains, only if with hard work luck shall also favour me in just once for at least
an impactful write, imbued with such sincerity
thanks for sharing, dear poet
Thanks dear reader…I am glad you liked it
Such a powerful poem from a very talented poet
Thank you so much Nicky…well your words might make me egoistic..I am not that talented after all…I am just spilling some random words around
I gotchu frfr
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