It’s painful

spilleronsheet

It’s painful 

when dreams shatter 

it’s painful 

when bubbles you make 

burst at the touch of reality 

it’s painful 

When your desires 

appears to be mirage soon 

it’s painful 

when those who praised you 

suddenly depart and runaway leaving you behind 

it’s painful 

when your loved ones 

don’t believe in your ambitions 

it’s painful 

to stand all alone 

mustering up courage 

to those who stood for taking claims 

claims in your win 

but the same abandon you 

when you fail 

why should one bear

the burden of fall 

all alone 

why this hypocrisy dear world 

Is aloofness the only solution 

maybe not 

maybe the key 

The key is detachment

to be spiritual 

to not acclaim the fruit 

but concentrate on blooming instead 

maybe it’s not atheistic 

it’s about necessity 

that keeps the heart throbbing inside 

finding the purpose of life 

  • Author: spilleronsheet (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 31st, 2021 11:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying the best to revive..but at times peace isn’t outside but it has to be inside
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 51
  • Users favorite of this poem: Fay Slimm., Vamsi Sudha
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  • Neville


    such insight is a wonderful gift .. but at what cost the pain of knowing ..
    not only a great poem my friend, but in the write hands, a splendid teaching aid too ... N

    • spilleronsheet

      Thank you so much Neville
      At times I wish if roses could be felt without thorns
      Why to bear so much pain after all ?

    • Fay Slimm.

      Pain seems unavoidable on this world's indifferent stage of hypocrisy where aloofness holds centre stage - - a read for my list to read over again and thanks for sharing.

      • spilleronsheet

        Thank you so much dear Fay
        It means a lot hearing from you
        Your Poetries have great insights
        And to come into your pages, it surely means a lot

      • Paul Bell

        When you fail, you fail alone.
        Is that what they say.
        Yet, I would say, no failure, no success.

        • spilleronsheet

          Well I witnessed the fall was faced alone
          But what is failure, what is success
          Nothing is impermanent

        • Vamsi Sudha

          You are very spiritual Poet !! I can read between the lines !! Touching one indeed !!!

        • Rainbow

          Well expressed poem . Your right these things are all very sad and painful and why should we have to deal with things alone . I am sorry you are hurting . I can relate to some of these ferlings

          • spilleronsheet

            Thank you little dove
            I might be alone wen I need to suffer
            But thanks to the community at mps who are backing me up with cheer and encouragement which gives me immense power to fight once again

          • Goldfinch60

            May that blooming within you be forever there and your life becomes wonderful.

            Andy

            • spilleronsheet

              Thank you so much Andy
              I just hope despite having faced so many pains, only if with hard work luck shall also favour me in just once for at least

            • L. B. Mek

              an impactful write, imbued with such sincerity
              thanks for sharing, dear poet

              • spilleronsheet

                Thanks dear reader…I am glad you liked it

              • Nicky Byrd

                Such a powerful poem from a very talented poet

                • spilleronsheet

                  Thank you so much Nicky…well your words might make me egoistic..I am not that talented after all…I am just spilling some random words around

                  • Nicky Byrd

                    I gotchu frfr



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